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electricgurl
2009-01-07 . chapter 1
these are just...perfect thanks for this!
Alexzander Stark
2007-05-10 . chapter 1
EVEY VERY GOOD BUT DID NOT LIKE #44 THE HOLE LORNE THING
Camerine
2007-04-08 . chapter 1
Awesome one-liners! A lot of them were done totally different than I would imagine people would write them. But it was great. XD

~Camerine
CharmedAli
2006-03-27 . chapter 1
really good i loved it
Hope's Tears
2006-03-17 . chapter 1
Absolutely fantastic - the stories that you allow us to create round the single sentences are all so easy to imagine. Amazing work there.
renisanz
2006-03-10 . chapter 1
I loved every one of them. It's like reading lines taken from a bunch of different universes of the Sheyla relationship. You could definitely take some of these and explore them more. You really know how to capture so much information in one sentence.
Cpt. Ritter
2006-03-09 . chapter 1
AH cute SP, all lovely!
Redbird27
2006-03-08 . chapter 1
These are all fabulous. I'd love to see full stories for each one! My favorites are 15 (cause I can't get enough of concerned Shep) and 44 (cause I really can't get enough of jealous Shep!). Really well done.
Celtic Knot
2006-03-08 . chapter 1
Oh, these are awesome! Is it all right with you if I borrow some to make longer stories with? 'Cuz this is Cool Plot Bunny Central!

–CeeKay
Yarrharr
2006-03-08 . chapter 1
these are all really good..amazing sentences that would make very interesting longer pieces. i'd really like to see you expand some of them. there's so much potential here :)
Ironic
2006-03-08 . chapter 1
Wow. Each and ever line was beautiful and moving. It says a lot about your writing that you're able to impose a whole story into one line. I'm a multi-shipper, so whenever I come across one of those rare S/T fic, I'm pleasantly surprised. (I love S/W, but geeze, they're so many of them!) Doubly happy, this time, 'cause this kinda rocks.

Worth commenting on:
# 29, safe, was particularly haunting.
#25, Shadow, was pure awesomeness.
#12, Wait, is *so* freakin' Sheppard.
#7, One, is the best in my personal opinion. Because I could see her asking him this one day.
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