 Ironic 2006-03-08 . chapter 1 Wow. Each and ever line was beautiful and moving. It says a lot about your writing that you're able to impose a whole story into one line. I'm a multi-shipper, so whenever I come across one of those rare S/T fic, I'm pleasantly surprised. (I love S/W, but geeze, they're so many of them!) Doubly happy, this time, 'cause this kinda rocks.
Worth commenting on:
# 29, safe, was particularly haunting.
#25, Shadow, was pure awesomeness.
#12, Wait, is *so* freakin' Sheppard.
#7, One, is the best in my personal opinion. Because I could see her asking him this one day. |