 ms.fredweasley 2008-12-07 . chapter 7How do you do a new chapter if your story says "Complete"?
Great chapter though! |
 ms.fredweasley 2008-12-07 . chapter 6hehe, Sokka. Great job at the ending! It's really good to end with the audience laughing!
I always thought Aang was born with the arrows, but your idea is a good theory too!
Okay, I could've sworn that I put this on my alert list, but I come to the page and there are 5 new chapters! Something was wierd, but at least now I get to read all these new chappies! |
 ms.fredweasley 2008-10-09 . chapter 3Why'd u say this story is completed?? There are so many unsolved mysteries u ca write! Like why Zuko loves Mai so much even though she has no emotion! Please continue this fic! I love it!
Another unsolved mystery is why Toff always acts so gross. |
 ms.fredweasley 2008-10-09 . chapter 2Ha! That was funny! I never thought a love for eating could come from something so...deep! |
 ms.fredweasley 2008-10-09 . chapter 1Aw, that was so sad, and sweet! This is really good! It's a great idea for a fic! I will definately read the rest of it! |
 Potato Soup 2007-06-21 . chapter 4Those were really nice stories. :D Nobody out of character. Grammar could've been better, though.
Just thought I'd mention... Tyro is the name of Haru's father. Iroh's son is named Lu Ten. |
 fanficismything 2007-04-12 . chapter 7Nice story! |
 Isn't Aang cute? 2006-09-23 . chapter 7 Hi, love you fan fics, but here are some more idea's (* means love):
1. An Aang*Katara.
2. A Sokka*Sukie.
3. A interview.
P.S.
stick to aang and sokka ones, there your best! |
 cardcaptor eternity 2006-08-15 . chapter 7this whole story is funny!! i love it!! |
 kooky 2006-08-10 . chapter 4 ginseng is a root |
 Kooky 2006-08-10 . chapter 3 you spelled Ginseng wrong...it's not raelly that tasty...tastes like dirt...my dads obsessed with it... |
 Dragon of the Fall 2006-08-01 . chapter 7Great story.Really funny |
 Gigawolf1 2006-06-27 . chapter 7Any mistakes story-wise are minor (names, and the fact that Aang said he was raised at the Airbender Temple his whole life), and this helps simplify the world of Avatar into an easy-to-read story. Keep it up |
 AirGirl Phantom 2006-06-22 . chapter 7Hm... Some of these are funny... |
 ElementistMagicAkua 2006-06-05 . chapter 4I SAW THAT EPISODE...I CAN'T REMEMBER WHAT OTHERS. I KNOW I SAW THE FIRST AND SECOND ONES, AND 'THE SWAMP" BUT I THINK THAT'S IT. |