 charmunclefleeblix-san 2007-11-23 . chapter 3 please update soon |
 Jtoasn 2007-08-16 . chapter 3The stories looking good, keep up the good work. |
 JustPlainPeachy 2006-05-26 . chapter 3Really good chapter! Keep it up! I cant wait till you update! |
 Zukofan5 2006-05-25 . chapter 3 Hey, still here, I had to reread the first two chapters because you haven't updated in like FOREVER! Oh, not to nag, but Rose still seems a little mary sue-ish. and her diologe sounds wooden. like she says; "That would be great. I would like to go to sleep." but a normal teenager(i asume she's a teen cuz she ca drive) would say;"That'd be great. I'd like to go to sleep." and try to use other words rather than 'Rose' like 'she' and 'her'. I still like it and I'll keep reading as long as Rose dosen't morph into Mary Sue and the plot is different! ^-^
ZF5~:-(
*hands you a plate of pancakes* sorry for nagging! |
 Sakura Neko-Chan 13 2006-03-15 . chapter 2Yay! I love it, that is so cool. I must see what happens next... Update soon! |
 Zukofan5 2006-03-10 . chapter 2 Ok, don't know if you just made a typo but its spelled "IROH" and um...there were a lot of spelling erorrs...but I like it. I still think that it sounds like ALL THE OTHER storys out there but I'll take your word for it and keep reading...
ZF5~:-( |
 someone who appears 2006-03-10 . chapter 2 you coppied a few things from other stories. and I dont think the authors would be proud. But hey thats just me. Anyways good beginning |
 holland.sexapples 2006-03-10 . chapter 1LOV IT! You must update or die! |
 JustPlainPeachy 2006-03-09 . chapter 2Great chapter...I can't wait till you update! |
 breathlesslove 2006-03-08 . chapter 1i love it! very nice, and a bit of a cliffy at the end, intriguing, please update soon!
~breathlesslove~ |
 Zukofan5 2006-03-08 . chapter 1 'ELLO! I think I got the first review but I don't know.
PLEASE! Try not to make her a "Mary-Sue"! and don't rush things!
go to G-o-o-g-l-e and then type in
D-i-s-t-a-n-t H-o-r-z-i-o-n (take out the "-"'s) then click on the "site map" and look for the "Mary-Sue Quiz" if you REALLY want to find out, I took it and it helped me stay out of the Mary-Sue zone. ANSWER TRUTHFULY!
update soon! I like this, I like a lot of "girl goes to Avatar world" plots as long as they have cool and interesting twists! like "Run Away" (good story)
You personal Fandom FOOL and DORK,
ZF5~:-( |
 JustPlainPeachy 2006-03-08 . chapter 1YAY! A new story! I really like it s far! Update soon PLEASE! |
 FyreFlower 2006-03-08 . chapter 1Good. But Zuko's a bit outta character. I would expect him to be slightly annoyed. But good start, I will look forward to reading it in the future. -AMy |