I was listening to every heat and watching inuyasha :) I love this story!

this is a good story but did you hear about this other awsome story its sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo AAAAWWWWWSSSOOOMMEE! it's called bride of the water god saskue and sakura love story check it out now

Haha we only read this to laugh in ur face I mean seriously sakura is sooooo farfetched from natural beauty one. Sasuke hates the mere thought of her walking next to him , why on earth would he date her gah sakura fans are delusional even Naruto stands a better chance of marrying sasuke hmmmm Naruto Uchimaki . . . That has a good ring to it

the most confusing fanfic i ever read, sorry to say,

WHAT THE HELL WHY DOSE SAKURA-CHAN ALWAYS HAVE TO BE A DANM CRYBABY HUH? THAT SHIT IS SOOOO DANM ANNOYINGGGG!SHE HAS CRIED IN EVER FUCK CHAPTER I HAVE READ SO FAR DONT GET ME WRONG THE STORYS GREAT! BUT WHY HUH JUST GOT DANM WHY!

This is a cute story! It's not too slow but not rushed either. Great job on this!

Chapter 8, haha! I love it! :D he's right, after all he put her through, he better not give her a kiss now! :/ heehee! Go inner conscience! Hurrah!

This was pretty good:)

This is just me but you might want to slow some of this down, in the first few chapters is seemed a bit rushed a little i think i saw a few grammar mistakes as well but overall very nice:)

that was very good for your first fanfic and i am very sorry that other people are nagging you about not being long enough or not liking th cliffies i think that s what makes authors good being able to add just a little suspenese to the story thank you again i really like your story sorry about the complaints from other people love ya bye

I LOVE IT! GOOD JOB! :)

i now is been a long time seens you do this fic but i realy like it its very interesting are you sure is your first fic?

nice story!1

It was good but you made Sakura kinda whiny and she cried to much.

SO CUTE!

OMG! Wow! did NOT see that commeing, but they are perfect for eachother so... WELL DONE!