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Infinite Tenshi 5/8/01 . chapter 2
whoa...that's all I have to say about this chapter. I decided that you didn't have enough reviews for this story, so I'm going to review every chapter, or at least try to remember to. Anyway, I'm going to say that Akane dying was really unexpected. This was really long but it was so good! I'll be back with another review soon. ja!

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Kesshi Mashin 5/5/01 . chapter 9
AAH! YOU AGAIN! STOP REVIEWING ME! I'm sorry, I just like to review stuff, k? And, like always, your stories never cease to amaze me. Another great fanfiction you got here, Fire! Please continue it soon, man! The wait is killing me!
Opt281 4/22/01 . chapter 9
This is one of the best Sailor Moon/Ranma stories I've ever seen. You've done such a wonderful job of getting into each character's conciousness, and it isn't often that I actually feel pity for Uranus & Neptune. (Very often, those two are portrayed as indifferent to everyone except each other.) And even while they are obviously very misguided, you've managed to retain a very human side to them. The situations that you have used to tie the other characters together are also very well crafted, and I am looking forward to seeing what happens as friendships develop and the plot thickens.
F i r e S o u l Signed Review 4/10/01 . chapter 9
OMG that was soooooooooooo good! write MOOORRRRREEEEE please! come on already! it's been what? 5 seconds? So continue already! Hey and try to have like some of the senshi, not transformed meet Hotaru and like then she finds out they're Sailor Senshi, it'd be soooooo cool! and what about the ofudas Rei is 'sposed to give to Nabiki-Chan? I say if anyone meets Hotaru or any of the Ranma characters it should be Rei and Usa!
Neko 3/28/01 . chapter 8
Written a review earlier. Seems to have disappeared... Blame www.fanfiction.net for that then. :)

Anyway, I found this story as it only had 7 chapters, and after finishing the 7th chapter I only had to wait for about 4 to 7 days before chapter 8 got out... (Author Alerts work great!) I was kinda surprised cause of the short wait, seeing the slow progress in chapters (which is perfectly understandable!) Couldn't wait reading it, which I promptly did :)

My point being: I like the storyline, and I definitly like the way you're telling it. Reading the story gives you a good insight in character development, aswell as a good visual description of fight scenes. IMHO it's worth the wait for the chapters! All this to say: Keep up the great work! Can't wait for the next chapters!
Chibi-chan v2.5 2/25/01 . chapter 8
*gags* PLEASE do NOT TELL ME it's Chibi-Usa n Ryoga? Black Lady is only big for that season she's still a wittle gurl...it's not right...but this is YOUR ficcie so i won't bother...and just another for Ranma...Hotaru is 12 and he's 16...i don't like that - -;;;; it must be because i read Destiny's Child with the Rei and Ranma (and he was Hotaru (it's just weird to see them as a couple now)) heheheh BUT (yes there is a but) I loved the part! but...consider to change the 'coupling' of Chibi and Ryoga (it ain't right i tell ya! ) But please continue! i can't wait!
Shuten 1/4/01 . chapter 1
Good job!
Moogle 6/4/00 . chapter 1
Eh...there'd be little point repeating my earlier comments about the intricacies of the plot and how the heroes are all in three separate factions (not to mention the bad guys are in two separate factions) and EVERYBODY is fighting one another. We can only guess what will stop the insanity, and I can't even do that... ;) Anyway, I'm very much looking forward to seeing Part 6 here on FF.N ... hopefully I won't be waiting too long, but I know how long these things can take - especially considering each part is 100kb long apiece. Good luck with writing the rest of the story; keep up the good work, too! :) - Moogle
anon 6/4/00 . chapter 1
Ahh...it keeps getting better and better! Now we've got the Ranma crew fighting just about everybody except for Sailor Saturn...the Inner and Outer Senshi just plain fighting everybody, and the evils fighting one another first and the good guys second. Major cheers to the author for coming up with such an intricate plot...especially to write it well in a crossover. Again there were a few word misspellings and uses (i.e. "air" instead of "heir" a few times,) but it's not particularly noticeable except for someone as bored as I am currently. I still think since this is posted in the Sailor Moon category that perhaps some more details in the Ranma parts should be explained but you're definitely getting better with that as things go on. Now off to wonder why Hotaru doesn't know she's Sailor Saturn...while reading the next chapter, of course. Keep up the good work! :) - Moogle
anon 6/3/00 . chapter 1
Plot twists... *drools* Nifty! (And I say that only because it's an ingenious idea, though it pains me at the moment to see the good guys fighting against one another. ) The whole thing has a Back to the Future-esque aura about it, which is definitely a good thing considering I love those movies alot. With the whole alternate timeline it's kinda confusing, but I guess it's supposed to be like that on purpose. There were a few typos that were missed in this chapter again, but as I said before I'm just a nitpicker. No more weird grammar this time, which is a good thing. :) Both of the fight scenes were great. They were described perfectly and I could actually picture what was going on in my mind. Rare are fight scenes in fictions where I can actually do this. Can't wait to read the next chapters...unfortunately I have to do that tomorrow. *grumbles* Well, keep up the good work, I know I'll keep reading! :) - Moogle
anon 6/3/00 . chapter 1
Ooh...an interesting way to do a Ranma 1/2 and Sailor Moon crossover - that is, they're fighting each other instead of something else. Even knowing so little about Ranma 1/2 I still found this enjoyable, because it's explained fairly well so one with even less knowledge than me can figure it out. Since you have posted it in the Sailor Moon section, it might have been a little better to further explain the Ranma elements (such as Genma's panda curse, or Ryoga's fiancees.) But that's just me, I think. There were a few things that I thought were grammar mistakes, but on the other hand my own grammar isn't perfect and they might have actually been correct but just seemed wrong to me. A couple of times you used the wrong "there" or "your", but hey, I'm just a nitpicker. :) The Sailor Moon timeline you picked to have this in was a good one, because even deprived dub children like myself can make sense out of it considering it's not far into Sailor Moon S. I'm off to read the remaining Parts that are on FF.N now, you'll hear from me again. Keep up the good work! :) - Moogle
amanda 5/28/00 . chapter 1
OK! now on to the story!
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