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marlee
2009-09-24 . chapter 16
can soneone finish this off as i really like it. please xx
hewhoreaps
2008-12-13 . chapter 16
Interesting story. I do hope you finish it
Luthiem Vardamir
2008-09-19 . chapter 16
WOW I Just loved this story it's INCREDIBLE and so well written, I always I always had love Charmed (mostly Chris xD) and Power Rangers, this is an amazing idea, I'm hopping you'll finish it please please please please I have to know if Eric and Taylor will end up together please I'M Begging

See ya
Artemida
2008-06-16 . chapter 16
Please please please say you're gonna update this soon! I love Charmed and Power Rangers, especially Kim, and using Ashley and Taylor as other Charmed Ones is great idea (though at the beginning I wasn't sure about Ashley, cosidering I've never watched PR Turbo, but now i like her). It was cool idea to give them whitelighter-witch-demonic's powers instead of plain witches's powers. I so wanna see Taylor and Eric together (he's so hot, u know what i mean;P) Besides, U just must say what happened to Piper, Pheobe and Paige! I'm dying to know this! As for the Tommy/Kim parring (which i normally adore)... I'm not sure right now if I want them together...

Update soon!

I'm begging u:) *begging on her knees*
Fire Dolphin
2008-03-25 . chapter 1
update soon, dont give up.
Knight Wulf
2007-10-15 . chapter 16
thanks for the updates loved them, please update soon
EagleQRex
2007-07-22 . chapter 16
i love this story!! you have to update! and i think kim should be with someone other than tommy, there's just too many fics with them together and i would love some more Eric/Taylor moments if you dont mind!! please!! ok ok im done , i just love that pairing, they're perfect for each other
Lulu Belle
2007-04-12 . chapter 9
glad you finally have stuff on Trini... though it seems now she is going to bow out of the picture... which is a shame because she has always been my favorite and Kim and her were like sisters in the series.
Lulu belle
2007-04-11 . chapter 6
Great job again, you are gifted in describing fighting scenes, but they are getting a bit tedious now... just wishing for more plot in between, though the Tommy part was a nice, small reprieve...

the last paragraph made absolutely no sense... then again it's 11 PM, I'm trying not to fall asleep and am procrastinating on homework.
lulu belle
2007-04-11 . chapter 5
yeah, decided to leave e-mail cuz don't think I'll ever get to logging in. lol.

very good description of fight. I really like Taylor in this... though its really sad thinking of how hard it will be for her and Erik to go back to their infamous teasing and mock arguements... and the others with their boys...

great job...

you kept me up till 1 AM so I am operating on 5hrs of sleep... not good when you have school. lol.
Lulu Belle
2007-04-10 . chapter 4
ok, first off, song fics are a big no-no now on It sucks, but its true. I have been blocked for a while because of one I wrote several years ago. I don't want you to lose this story.

Also, I felt the full song lyrics were unneeded. Oddly, I love imagining skits or whatever that take place during songs or incorporate them in a plot line. However, it is really hard to work if the character is just singing the song. A song fic would work, but lyrics in a sotry just because the lyrics are froom the song the character is singing doesn't work.

Don't get me wrong, they were perfect choices, I could definetely picture it, but it doesn't belong in your story. Sorry.

Otherwise, this was great.


p.s. I love the song "Girl Next Door" however, I am a cross between one of the guys and the little-sister of my guy friends (I believe the word they use to describe me is "cute"... like a 6 year old).

Great character personalities and interpretations, just no more songs. Please.

Great job again.
lulu belle
2007-04-10 . chapter 2
lol... next time, you should spell out ERS... it took me a while to guess what it was, and only your earlier descritption helped a little... but it could have been Slap Jack (dif. game) and not everyone would know the abbreviation, let alone that name. I have heard numerous different names for that game (though I love it... and have walked away from games victorious but in great pain).

Very good, I really do love Eric and Taylor... Kim and Tommy are a forver couple, Andros and Ashely were the first couple in the serious I fell in love with and I wished more happened... but Eric and Taylor never got to go anywhere with their relationship (and they are the most recent I've seen) so I really enjoyed their part in your chapter.

I wonder, are the guys going to have a revelation on how hard their girls work and their life is, how much they sacrifice for what they do?

ttyl...

you know, you are a bad influence... its midnight and i still have homework.
Lulu Belle -too lazy to log in
2007-04-10 . chapter 1
Fan of Charmed? lol. I'm actually not, my friend lived and breathed the show (up until the goddess thing) so naturally, I was forced to watch some of the show. lol.

Very good. I like your descriptions and everything, and your character choice!! Though, it was hard to make the switch from Kim to Ashley with just the line break... I thought it was a "later" type thing and was very confused till I read "Ashley"... which then I was even more confused so I had to go back and reread the whole thing. Just and FYI.


Very good! I really like this story! Keep up the great work!

p.s. I actually saw your Music Video "On the Way Down" for Kim and Taylor (which I REALLY love, it really fits). Then I read you said it was for your fanfic, so I had to check this out. Great job and best of luck in your story and MVs
littlewhitelie91
2007-02-14 . chapter 1
i love this fic so please pms!
Audreena_Dumbledore
2007-01-30 . chapter 16
A month? We have to wait a whole month before the next part? That is just...mean, :cries:

hmm...just a question, but what is going to happen with Taylor and Eric? i'm really looking forward to that relationship... :D
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