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Kashrlyyk
2006-12-15 . chapter 5
This is a bad story. I was okay, till it reached the point with Jessica meeting Ron. Wow, Ron actually is angry at McGonagall, and he has every right to.
But then within a few seconds, he is all okay with it? He reaches Hermione and doesn´t scream her head off, but instead tells her he loves her? He didn´t feel betrayed?
That is one whipped Ron you have created there.

She didn´t want to be selfish? WHAT? How is saying "I am pregnant" selfish? In fact hiding the daughter is selfish! She stole from Ron all the firsts that are there in a life. The first word, walk and so forth. She stole from Ron the chance to be with his daughter from the beginning, the chance to be a good father. She practically said, that Ron is not able to get a carreer and still raise a child? Even worse, yes that is possible, the said:"... I couldn’t let you do that, so I just thought it would be best to leave."
Who the * does she thinks she is? So Ron is incapable of making the right decision? She has to make that decision for him? Again selfish.

Hermione, in your story, doesn´t give a * about Ron. All she wants is an easy life without the problems that having a carreer and a child could create. She is a coward. And Ron should have screamed at her for all the * she had done.
A very stupid, bad story, which started so promising.
ally green
2006-12-01 . chapter 7
aw tht was so cute
Marissa-Emily
2006-07-03 . chapter 7
AWESOME STORY!

-harrypotterfreak93
illusion100
2006-05-16 . chapter 7
AW! this story is just so adorable!
katiemarie x3
2006-04-24 . chapter 7
BEAUTIFUL

i was sad to see this story come to an end... it was wonderful! I LOVED IT!

it made me cry, i LLOVEDD it!!

awesome job, if i remember i'm going to try and read some more of your stories. I'm putting you on favorites!
chuck_taylor_girl
2006-04-17 . chapter 7
Aww, a very cute story!A follow up would be cute, even if you wrote it as just a one shot. Do like, Jessica's first date! I'd love to see how Ron reacts! Ahahaha, well, it's really cute! Thanks for a great read! =)
RandomSmiles
2006-04-16 . chapter 7
Aw...that was so very sweet. An epilogue or sequal, maybe? :)
Ze-veil-of-ze-faeries
2006-04-16 . chapter 7
Aw! This was such a cute story!
Dracolover2008
2006-04-16 . chapter 7
alright absolutely love this story adn hope that you update or write a sequel to it.
thesongremainsthesame
2006-04-16 . chapter 7
Yay! *Does dorky victory dance*
Digi-Girl101
2006-04-16 . chapter 7
If this isn't the end then update soon!
thesongremainsthesame
2006-04-16 . chapter 4
Just a reminder, one cannot apparate from Hogwarts grounds...

Okay, now that I've got that done...I am LOVING this story. This is my first review in 4 chapters, but I loved this chapter so much. Especially when Ron found out about Jessica. Really great!
Rayne rosalie black
2006-04-16 . chapter 7
very very very very very very good carry on please
randhr2
2006-04-15 . chapter 7
Aww... That was sweet!! Oh man!! You arent going to continue. I wanted to see what will happen and what they will say at the wedding! :(
Zarroc
2006-04-15 . chapter 7
awesome chapter, i really liked it, keep reading and writing and post next chapterss oon
-Zarroc-
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