This is a fantastic story! I really, REALLY it. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Good work! Hope you update this! It's too good to waste! Cyraxis

Wow! That was awesome! Really well written! You write duels really well! And; yay! Sirius survives! Cyraxis

I really like this story, but it's incredibly similar to the book. I can guess that this is the point, but in this chapter, it was almost too indifferent. On the OTHER HAND, I think that this will be great in time, and I look forward to reading the upcoming chapters.

You changed the story very well. You twist things ever so slightly and make the story run differently. I'm terribly impressed. I like the way you made all the past tenses in the book into present tenses. Very cool.

Cheers

I didn't se much differences in Harry's attitude (except no killing of the office). I think this is almost copied word for word. That's not very intresting to read.

This was really good. Is there more to this story or just this chapter?

Hmm... Very interesting, my dear, very interesting. If I remember correctly, Remus wasn't there in the actual OOTP. Really, very believable. I like it. Quite a lot. -

I love the little details you put in, hun. So many people just skim over fighting scenes, only putting in the action, and the spells being exchanged. I'll be keeping an eye on this story, my dear.

Ja, sweetheart!

That was very, I don't want to use the word but, cool. You really did a great job with altering the event. And Sirius didn't die! Really nice one-shot.

Cheers

hmm... quite intriguing. There are many fics where Sirius doesn't die in the 5th book - however,yours is the only fic I've read so far that actually describes what happens in the Department to make it so - at least believably so.

Just wondering... is the slash really necessary? Because I think just friendship would be interesting enough, and it might take away from the writing.

Eventhough more than half was written by J.K Rowling, you did a really good job..I kind of forgot which part wasn't real...So good job...And update soon!

Love,

TJP

Intresting! I would love to read more.

Wow! That was amzing! More please!