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Trish
2009-03-17 . chapter 1
i read it again. :]
this story NEVER fails to make me cry, i swear.
it's like, whenever i feel sad, i read this to make me even sadder.
guh. :( GOOD JOB, though. :)
0tH_fan54
2008-07-09 . chapter 1
OMG ! I LOVE THIS. great job, I love the enclosed line at the end. continue writing, please!
BRUCAS EQUALS LOVE
2007-09-02 . chapter 1
that was fantastic! it was sad so so sad! great job!
BL-CS
2007-08-18 . chapter 1
this is so awesome! i love it!... it's so sad. :(( god job!
princetongirl
2007-07-16 . chapter 1
loved it update soon
Brucas46Forever
2007-06-22 . chapter 1
OMG! DAMN! This was beautiful. Like, seriously, I'm speechless. And I know you wrote this a long time ago but I just saw it and I am so frickin' in LOVE with it. God! It's great! It's so sad and . . and . . you made me cry! Not a lot of people can do that.

...Okay, so anyone can do that. I'm a crybaby, but still. This was amazing! I'm serious. Gosh, how she just let him go and the part where her voice faltered when she thought about the Leyton children. And him and how heartbroken he is. Gosh. This was amazing.

xoxo,
Nora
forblueskies89
2007-06-21 . chapter 1
omg girl that was so sad and beautiful

your best oneshot yet

i had no idea where it was going when it started off

and when she was talking about him and peyton's kids i couldn't help but tear up

i mean brucas would have the best kids, gah this was sad

great job!
EYnem
2007-04-30 . chapter 1
OMG i feel like crying..this one shot is beautiful
awhero
2007-03-31 . chapter 1
oh wat a story! i really like it. it's not predictable for one! i like that although they dunt end up together it's all abt brucas! great job!
jeytonbrucasnaley
2007-03-30 . chapter 1
oh.. my.. god.. i think a tear just fell down my cheek. that was so sad! my god but it was woderful! you have no idea how much i loved this. i mean.. oh my god, i think im speechless...

oh my goodness that was so sad and ah, i love how you incorperated a bunch of different stuff. i wish we could've figured otu what was in the letter though. ah but man.. i dont think the tears hit me until she said you're going to get married. thats when i just wanted to cry and from then on i was like sobbing lol ahh.. AMAZING job!
yummydumplinggs
2006-12-12 . chapter 1
That was so sweet. It made my cry
sweetassassin23
2006-11-04 . chapter 1
Wow, such an intense oneshot. I loved it :)
brucas da bomb
2006-09-30 . chapter 1
I know it's been a while since you wrote the first chapter but I'm very intrested and think this would make a great story.
chebelle
2006-07-04 . chapter 1
Argh, it was so intense! I dont get how Peyton could hook up with Lucas tho. it doesn't matter brooke was gone, I just dont understand how she could get herself to do something like that. I'm sure it was obvious Lucas was still hurting. I liked the ending. I suppose that was the only way it could end. it would have been so lame if they got back together or something:P Anyways, nice work, I really loved it.
chebelle xox
Callalilyflower
2006-05-09 . chapter 1
OMG Tejal I just read this story now. How come I didn't know about it? It was so sad and heartbreaking but just phenomnial. Seriously one of the best. I cried. I wish it didn't end that way but it makes sense. Loved it!
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