Absolutely wonderful story. Love the Jack/chloe interactions, so sweet! Can't wait for more!

Just found this story and want to say it's really good!

Please tell me you have chapters of this on your compy, waiting to upload. This story is excellent, nearly everyone is in character and Jack and Chloe rock.

Note on characters: with so many, it's hard for them all to play ball in any given genre. For example, Tony is pushed back, and it works for this story since Jack is the Alpha ALPHA dog, yeah?

Wow, this is quite the awesomeness and just plain good to boot! And Chloe as HERSELF? Heck, yeah, baby! She's terrific.

i just started to read this story and can not wait for the next update so please try to update real soon. thanks and take care, anne

I would love for you to finish this.

Woah, with both 25 and NCIS over this year this has me on the edge of my seat. Please update. All of the characters are in character and believable. Please update soon

I REALLY REALLY love this story. I hope you continue.
Love jack and chloe in this fic. It feels very true to the series.

Just started reading this and I love it! Only on the 3rd chapter but you've written Chloe perfectly. I can see every eye-roll! :) I really hope you're going to finish this!

Ah! I started reading this without realizing it was a WIP! It's a fast read--just like an episode of 24. You've really captured the back and forth between Chloe and Jack and the building tension as Jack gets deeper into enemy territory. Can't wait to see how it all ends!

any chance of another chapter?

My! It has been a long time hasn't it? Glad to see one of my favorite 24 stories brought back to life. I just had to reread the entire thing before reviewing. You have all the characters perfect. The Jack and Chloe chemistry is right on target along with the NCIS crew. Tony, McGee, Kate, (Nothing against Ziva but I really miss that woman) and especially Jethro Gibbs. You have most of the main team together with the exceptions of Duckie and Abbie.

I would love to find out what the bad guys are up to. Mandy is one of the extremely rare bad guys to have encountered Jack Bauer and live to tell the tale. If they tried to frame him and I suspect that was Mandy's idea, then they would know that he would be trying to stop them. They might have a few more supprises waiting for him.

Wow, it's back! I was so happy to see a chapter update in my in-box.

You did an excellent job building up to the next chapter with the typical Jack Bauer stealth. His interaction with Chloe was well done and the hint of what's to come with the cargo container makes me want to read the next chapter even more.

I like McGee and Chloe's interactions and I hope that they continue to develop as the story continues. I also think that once Gibbs and Bauer get past the first meeting they'll really strike some fear into DiNozzo.

As for Jack I think that you've done an excellent job of keeping him in character. Just broody enough without making him out to be a complete sap and definitely not a "Rambo"-like character that kicks in doors to accomplish the mission. My only regret is that Kate is still around (not that I don't like her) but I think it would have been fun to see Jack interacting with Ziva.

Hopefully the terrorists plans will be flushed out a little bit more in the next chapter and we'll get some more feedback from the CTU side of the operation. How will Jack be escaping from the warehouse, especially after doing something so conspicuous as rescuing the terrorists number one hostage? Will Gibbs and the team beat feet out to the warehouse to save him? What role will Mandy play and will she use her feminine wiles to seduce DiNozzo? Or at least embarrass him when she reveals she's a lesbian?

I hope to see more from you and if you need any beta-ing I'm still available and would love to lend a hand. Shoot me a PM or, if you still have it, use my e-mail address if you need anything.

BD

This is an awesome story keep it coming... can't wait to see what happens

yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.