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River-Acantha
2007-08-29
ch 13,
abuseOh my goodness... I can't stop crying right now... This is one of the most heartbreaking story I've ever read. When I was reading the very first chapter, I felt as if I've run out of air, I couldn't seem to breathe. At the first chapter I started to cry when I remembered what happened in the Order of the Phoenix... And then from that chapter on, even with those happy memories-I cried and kept crying until now that I've calmed down. My comment might not do much but still, this story made my day as to-I think- many others.

Thank you for writing and posting this series of memories of Remus and Sirius. Now I can't help but smile along typing this. Thank you for sharing this with us all.
Belegwathiel
2007-07-24
ch 13,
abuseThat was wonderful. Beautiful. I love these stories. They're just adorable.
xxanglophilexx
2007-07-13
ch 13,
abuseOhh, I loved this. There was the right amount of angst and fluff. The last chapter was great, because it was touching without being cliche or cheesy. Chapter 2 was so sweet and young. The entire thing was just fabulous. I loved it.
yourmomismyheart
2007-07-02
ch 12,
abuseOuch!
This one was SO SAD.
Great job, really, though.
I love the flashback and how that sort of interwove with the current time in the story.
=]
yourmomismyheart
2007-07-02
ch 8,
abuseAww!
How sweet.
I loved this chapter.
=]
rekahneko
2007-05-17
ch 13,
abuseJust so you know, this story collection always makes me want to cry, but in a good way.
(-:
Guardian Fox
2007-03-20
ch 13,
abuseoh wow... that was beautiful. thank you for sudgesting this to me, i laughed and cried the whole way through.
it may have been more dramatic if sirius hadn't said anything and lupin had just walked away... but it is interesting the way you left it to us to figur out what we want those last words to mea
Krazi Kelli
2007-01-13
ch 13,
abuseyou have me all in tears, wow that was powerful, so did sirius somehow come back? or did remus just hear his voice? this was really well written. im putting it on favorites
TheBoltShapedScar
2006-11-07
ch 1,
abuseCute
darkheartpoet
2006-10-10
ch 13,
abusecongratulations my dear. you have succesfully made a grown man cry. with words. this was beautiful. I cannot even express how beautiful this was... you are truly amazing. please don't ever stop writing =]

poet/cara
Emerald Elf-Slytherin707
2006-08-31
ch 13,
abuseThat was wonderful! what an ending! I throughly enjoyed that. And it really surprised me, how Sirius came back right at the end, I almost want you to continue, but I think that might ruin it. Great work!

-Emerald Elf-Slytherin707-
Billius
2006-06-04
ch 13, anon.
abuseWOW! Oh man... I'm actually crying. That was truly beautiful! You are a brilliant writer.
restless-soul
2006-05-29
ch 13,
abusethe words they drift out of my head,
and i've forgotten what was to be said.

you've put me in awe..this story and the end of it..was one of the best you've written, that i've read, so far.

oh my..it was just so good. great. fantastic. awesome.etc.etc.
PrincessSkywalkerOrgana
2006-05-27
ch 13,
abuseAw.
Perfect.
absolutely awesome.
what other superlative can I use?
Reality Is Elusive
2006-05-20
ch 13,
abuse*sniffle* so sweet, so sad...by the end of the last chapter i was nearly crying...well done, a fine effort at a truly amazing story
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