YOUASSHOLEWHY!WHYDIDYOULIETOTHEM! *continues to rant to a non-existent Lothor, very angrily* other than that, cool interpretation of what went down! alas, we may never know, truly, how Lothor did that to them... D:

So that's how Lothor convinced them to work for him. This was good.

Ah, nicely done. Love it. Great start for Ninja Storm. Catch ya on the flip side.

Niice! I like! You didn't make the bad guys too scary or convincing, but you do well with individual reactions. You have a gift with people. Keep going!

This is pretty cool, I like it. I do think they believed Lothor too quickly, as I thought in the show as well, but otherwise this was a really unique look into something we never heard of in any episode.

Yeah, how Lothor conviced the Bradleys to go against the Wind Ninjas was never fully explained in the show. Your fic made it belieavable. Good fic. Write more, will ya?

This is very depressing, but so true. You brought the brotherly love the two share for each other so good. It was touching with how much they do care about the other, and they're each other's first thought. Blake and Hunter are just, well they really care about each other, you did such a good job.

Great start to the story! It seemed like the brothers were fooled a little too easily, but considering it involved matters of family that might not be so surprising. I liked the twist at the end of the chapter.

Whoa. Good one. I really like how you built Lothor's "converting" of the brothers. It's one of the largest gaps the show left, and you did a good job filling it up.

this sounds like it's going to turn into a great story...please continue!

I LOVE IT!

Whoa! Excellent fic! I have to agree with Dany, this is excellent! Loved it! Please write more!

I liked this on LJ, too, but I'll say it again: Very nice fic! Your style is nice and flowing, and Zurgane's bragging gave me a good chuckle.

This was a nice 'un-scene' to Thunder Strangers and offered a very probably explanation as to what happened to Blake and Hunter while on Lothor's ship - something we saw a total of...3 seconds? on the actual show!

Hope you'll write more!

Greetings from Dany