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| yaoilover6969 2008-09-22 ch 2, | abusethat was a awesome story, i really thought that they were all dead you had me fooled. plesase conitune writing stories. ^_^ |
| NekoKaru 2003-01-21 ch 2, | abuseGood story. I almost threw up at Aisha's description. |
| Abadon 666 2002-06-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseAshia got a cool death compared to her pal Sazuka who got a rather plain,bland death. For some reason fans don't seem to like Sazuka as much as they do the other two women, never understood why, maybe it's on account of they had one too many ladies in the regular cast. |
| Chiizu 2001-11-03 ch 2, | abuseI read this again and... ::sniffs:: It's so sad! Oh my god I love this story! It was exellently written! You're a very great author! |
| Insane Anime Chick^.^ 2001-10-10 ch 2, anon. | abuseHey!!! That was excellent!!! Sad, angsty, and lots of JIM TORTURE!!! Great writing!!! Keep it up!!! |
| Sawyar Gunn 2001-09-09 ch 2, anon. | abusethat was awsome! so suspensfull i couldent stop! PHEW! that was great |
| KawaiiWhiteWolf 2001-09-02 ch 2, | abuseTHAT WAS A GOOD STORY |
| Melfina3 2001-08-27 ch 2, | abuseomg!!! tissues...tissues..where the hell are the tissues!!! *sniffle* omg...that was so sad!!! but i love sad stories!! |
| Wiachi 2001-08-26 ch 2, | abuseOMG!!! That was the saddest thing I have ever read! I couldnt believe it at first but then it turned out well in the end! ^.^ I love your Outlaw Star fics, you really need to finish the one with the Mermaid (I cant remember the title ^^;;;) keep writing, domo!?! |
| TDsamo 2001-07-19 ch 2, | abusethat's the second ols nightmare i read...they're disturbing, but i can't resist them! |
| Smurf The Almighty 2001-06-21 ch 2, anon. | abuseGood story, writer needs to spell better, possibly get peer revision otherwise its a good plot, predictable but good! =) |
| C4PyroGirl 2001-06-04 ch 2, | abuseOh so sad and very good!!!!!!!!!! |
| Drake 2001-05-19 ch 2, anon. | abuseOK, when I read the first chapter I was deciding whether to rag you so horribly or just say nothing at all. Then, I read the second chapter, and now all I'm gonna do is give you a but stern warning. DON'T YOU EVER KILL OFF ANYONE EVER AGAIN! THAT'S A BIG NO-NO, DAMN IT! ...........ok, I feel better now. Hope you'll write more fics as emotionally stirring as this one. |
| kiyonekawaii 2001-05-18 ch 2, | abuseGreat story but next time don't rush it so much. I could've been better if you had taken more time on it. I still liked it though. |
| Kikumaru 2001-05-18 ch 2, | abuseo_o;...I'm scared now. ;-; Poor Jimu-chan...good fic though |