please update this is so cute
and wooden spoon across the ass

Why don't you make them stay together and be nice to one in other AND NO BAD WORDS! Muwahahahhahahahahaha!

its really good, but really confusing. you're only putting quotation marks after what they say. it should be before AND after. "like this." not, like this"

cause it gets confusing and hurts my brain x_x

Inuyasha time-out cuz he will get bored and kouga spanking :) brings back unwanted memories

i think those boys need a spanking

i love it

LOL have her spank them

Please update soon. I think she should let Kagome decide their punishment.

Awesome! PLease update soon!

Those two... sharing a room... AWESOME!

-WT

Cool.I think she should either spank em or the usual stay in their room.

Have her Spank them, tickle them or just no dinneer either way i am coming back whan you update

Ha Ha so funy this is good plz update soon

I checked this fic out because the summary looked suspiciously similar to that of another (well-known) Inuyasha puppy-fic on this site. Fearing some form of copy-catting, I read it...Turns out that that author has nothing to worry about.

Like the others have said: you have to pay more attention to your work. Your syntax is nearly non-existing and at certain points it kinda gets confusing as to what is going on. Even more important, you HAVE to write in more detail. This fic as it is gives us the impression that you are not a good story-teller because it's too simplistic. Almost embarrassingly so.

This isn't a flame. I'm just saying that this story needs a LOT of work. Btw, ARE you familiar with the story "Puppy 101" (the one I made reference to above?). It could be mere coincidence, but your summary is just too similar to that one...

*giggles* She could always dress 'em up! Pink, yellow! Ruffles, lace, satin, oh my! I like the story idea, but it needs major editing. It's extremely rushed, and not very descriptive. There isn't a single paragraph, and the quotaions are all messed up. o_O If that could be fixed, and if you slowed it down, it'd be much better.

Good luck!

Lou