All of these were wonderful, you write the scenes very well even with few words, they are vivid and lovely :)

--Aileene

Interesting. I like how you can fit all the emotion into such a small... Whatever you wanna call it. Keep it up!

Awesome ending. So she won't have to be alone or settle for anything Robin gives her. That's cute. Well, it's been a blast reading something from you. I've always tried to read a story or two from your collection but never got around the time to reading any.
Seeya around dude-ette!
Mind Shadow

Hey, brown eyes are cool! Yea, Dick's supposed to have 'icy-blue' eyes but for the cartoon I always imagined him to have dark eyes. I have brown eyes. Well, great chapter!
Mind Shadow

Wow-- uhmm... intense. It's amazing how you're able to get the message across so effectively with the fewest of words. 'Downstairs' -- that made me laugh though.
Mind Shadow

Again, the lack of quantity does not amount to the great quality you've pushed for this chapter. Simple, yet to the point where Raven's able to confront her inner most inhibitions with the shortest of words-- thus staying true to her character.
Great!
Mind Shadow

O I like how you you portrayed the reasons behind Raven's acctions. It was short, yet effective. Very very cool. Next Chapter!
Mind Shadow

It's so...(sniffle)Romantic!(Breaks down and starts crying)