Youre last cahpter was really good dont give up yet keep writin youre good!!

Please write more chapters

Keep Updating! Your story rocks!

Hey dude! Don't give up just yet! I like your story, and I'm sure others do too-they just are too damn lazy to write a review. Just remember-Illigitimae non carborendum! (That's latin for "Don't let the bastards get you down" ;) The way you portray everyone's personality is dead on, and not everyone can do that. Just add a little more action, romance, and blood-those seem to be the stories that are the most popular...ah, do whatever the hell you want; you're obviously a talented writer!

Hi
You're story was really good normally i dont like these kind but i read all three and please carry on!

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Please carry on