OMG! I loved it! ^^ It had an awsome storie line, and it was the way i wanted it to be! xP



THANK YOU FOR THE STORY! :D


P.s Your a really good author.

Gorgeous. You really are talented. And finally, someone actually got it right. It's Prince Jonathan IV of Conte, not Prince Jonathan I of Conte. Sheesh.

When I read the first line... I had to laugh! I'm not sure why it was so funny, but thanks for it anyways!

I love your story (even if I'm an AG fan :P)

I just realised a loophole- she never repaired her sword. She never did the combining thing with lightning and the crystal sword, yet she does have lightning. AH, but its okay that's pretty minor.

very good i don't think that Alanna is being too terribly unreasonable but where ever will she go

very good, and i did think that you might bring roger back

good so far

very good i luff it too death

yes he would be upset

Very good and i like the bit of wisdom they both shared about forgiving each other.

Jon is being sorta a jerk, but you do a good job keeping him in character, I wonder what that says about jon

i will, review that is not kill you. infact i do belive that i am reviewing. Great job so far

very good

Very good i really like it so far

wait when are you going to be mean to george