Hi Blackrose!
I know it's a long time since your last update, and I'm wondering if you even around here anymore, but I just read your story and I thought I let you know that it's very good and I hope some day you gonna finish it.
It's really kind of evil from you to back out with such an cliffhanger:)
So please update and let us know why Chase did what he did and how House will confront him ...

Now it really has been an age since your last update. I hope you will continue soon. It's extremely evil of you to stop the story right where Chase finally wakes up. Please please please tell me that you will not stop this story, because I'm so curious. *gets down on knees and begs for continuation*

For your first fanfic, this is awesomelly good! (did I spell that right?) Please update

even though it has been a long time since you have updated, i just wanted to say that i really liked this story so far, it fits the House characters well, and the story is really interesting, and different, i dug House's dream in the clinic, good stuff!! I hope you decide one day to finish this one, i think it has TONS of potential!! ^_^

I'm hoping that there's gonna be some House/Chase love coming up! :)
Great story.

whoa. very interesting story. keep it up! i'd love to see what happens next to our dear characters--and what else is up with chase and house, especially.

Interesting, I'm glad Chase is finally up, he and House need to have a chat. I'm curious as to what he took with the alcohol, but I guess you'll explain that shortly. Anyhow, interesting and good, not enough Wilson and especially Chase.

YAY, you're back. I'm still here. LOL
Good chapter. I like how House's guilt played out. It was well done. And now I can't wait for the next bit and Chase waking up.

I am really enjoying this fic. All of the characters are so wonderfully...in character, for lack of better words. Please update as soon as you can, and for the record, this chapter wasn't short, it was about twice the length of something I'd write!

very good sotry cant wait for the next chapter

A very great fiction! I love the way you describe House's thoughts. Keep it up.

Ade

Wow, I like this a lot. I want to see the final chapter: Why Chase? Why?

Heh heh, your imagery is very well done, the characters aren't really OOC (definitely not Chase, we haven't heard a word from him lately), and the relationships House has with Cuddy and Wilson are spot.

Plus, I don't wanna see our "little wombat" die!

where have you gone still waiting for chap 6 hope you update soon thanks

This fan fic was so so for me. Following the emotion coming off Cameron in waves, this chapter feels clinical and detached, even for House. Wilson asleep, that makes sense, he always seemed like a deep sleeper to me. (that didn't sound as dirty in my head...) House getting up early, not so much, even though you said it was due to pain. That was a major problem, for me. The fact that you simply told us it was painful did nothing to evoke a real sense of pain in the reader. If you've never gone through that kind of pain (and I can only hope you haven't, for your sake) I can see how it would be difficult to get it just right. And you were close, but figurative expressions like "jagged pain" are good, and a few more would be beneficial.
I am starting to come off a little harsh, but I am only trying to be constructive. I like it. I really do. And I will be interested to see just what Chase was thinking, and what he did to himself. Must have been really bad to try and kill yourself...

PS... if you want a really good example of "real pain" try Sy's fic at: . Very good, and quite long. Good luck with future chapters!!

Kudos,
house_addict

I'm really enjoying this so far. I love anything that has to do with Chase angst and his rocky relationship with House. I'm looking forward to their conversation!