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| beautifulmess2005 2008-05-25 ch 2, | abuseSO sweet...Im only on chapter 2 but I'm in love with "Maddy" already! Keep up the good work. |
| silenced22 2007-07-27 ch 13, | abuseI think it's about time that you updated!! I really need more! I love this story!! |
| Rocky<3Tolkien 2007-07-16 ch 13, anon. | abuse*le sigh* I luv this chap like Jack luvs cake. Okay, in a perfect world he'd love cake, alright? Read it and weep...and then dry your tears and write some more...k? Rocky |
| st.elmo-lover 2007-07-15 ch 13, | abuseSo, a friend of yours gave me the name of this story and your penname and I have to say that I wasn't disappointed. I'm more of a Bobby/Oc person myself, and even though this seems like it may turn into a Jack/Oc, I still like it a lot. You write really well and your work is funny. Keeps me entertained and all that. The story doesn't drag on either. Nice job! :D |
| tlm1633 2007-07-09 ch 13, | abuseok all I want to say is...PLEASE UPDATE! even though it took me a year to update mine at least I updated :( so pretty pretty please with a cherry on top update! |
| rage-ember 2007-05-07 ch 13, anon. | abusePlease, You have to update SOON!! I can't stand waiting, and I need to find out what happens next!! Please, I love your story, Please update SOON!! Thankyou |
| Sesshoumaru-LiL-Wolfe 2007-05-02 ch 13, | abusei really liek ur story and i can't wait to find out what happens next i hope ya can update soon^_^ |
| jackysgal 2007-04-25 ch 13, anon. | abusei love this story.. your gonna have to get more done ASAP |
| becki2810 2006-12-25 ch 13, | abuseThis is such a cool story does jack love maddie, will leah believe maddie please write more it's a great story becki |
| MercerGirl21 2006-11-30 ch 1, | abuseI cant wait for more. |
| Petey the Pimpin Pirate 2006-10-23 ch 12, anon. | abuseARGH! this story is ** awesome. ARGH! You need to update. I lovwe Jack and Maddy and everywon. there so ** aamzing. *Inner pirate within stretches its arm out and yells ARGH WORLD!* Sorry, I just love this story to itsy bitsy pieces! Keep going or I might go pirate on your **! Hugs and Kisses Petey Argh... |
| Reeda 2006-10-21 ch 13, anon. | abuseOMG this story is ** awesome, kay? omg, like i ** laughed every ** second. kay? ** THAT! Kay? Like omg like when are you gonna ** update I want a **date right now! (haha, update plus **..get it??...*silence*) Moving on... Yoo hoo?? Verr arr you?? Do not vurry my dear, I vill find you!! So like, how bout it? Don't know why I asked that but oh well. I'm asuming you know who this is by now...if not...you're ** dense kay? I bet you're askin yourself right now "WHO DA HELL IS REEDA?" And I'm saying "I'm REEDA you ** imbecile. Kiss me, I'm Irish and I am doing you mom." OMG, like, I so ran into Smokay Peaches today...he was smokin cherries but thats beside the point...he said that thmokay jr twill be fired!! *Big Gasp and Sigh* No more smokay and the peaches and the jr...no more of those silly pitchfork dreams...no more ** lions...wait! That came out wrong! Oh dear, I will cry...but NO! i must resist. I'm laughing...but only to stop my tears of despair...Naw, I'm just looking at "** lions" and i really didn't mean for it to come out so wrong...forgive and forget? Yeah right...2 months from now I'm gonna be like "Hey, wassup?" and you're gonna be like "Nothing...tee hee ** lions" and I'll be like "What" and you'll be like "Uh, nothing, I said I was sucking lemons." (cause, you know, you have like a pocket full of lemons at ALL times...) (okay, maybe just lemon war heads)(eww, my tongue went numb after all those war heads...blech) Anywho, great chap and all that **...go have fun and please, no lions. Your dear friend Reeda you: "Who the HELL is REEDA?" |
| Rogue21493 2006-10-05 ch 13, | abuseI really like your story. Please finish it. I want to know what happens. Thanks. |
| iszgarretthedlund 2006-09-22 ch 13, | abuseomg seriously i fkn love how bobby and maddy acted in the grocery store that is so fkn funny!! argh!! LOL@JACK poor thing!! argh please update soon! i really like your writing!! WO |
| iszgarretthedlund 2006-09-22 ch 12, | abusenah i thought it was david!! nice twist tho!! i like the tampon joke especially how jack reacted haha so cute |