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beautifulmess2005
2008-05-25
ch 2,
abuseSO sweet...Im only on chapter 2 but I'm in love with "Maddy" already! Keep up the good work.
silenced22
2007-07-27
ch 13,
abuseI think it's about time that you updated!! I really need more! I love this story!!
Rocky<3Tolkien
2007-07-16
ch 13, anon.
abuse*le sigh* I luv this chap like Jack luvs cake. Okay, in a perfect world he'd love cake, alright?

Read it and weep...and then dry your tears and write some more...k?

Rocky
st.elmo-lover
2007-07-15
ch 13,
abuseSo, a friend of yours gave me the name of this story and your penname and I have to say that I wasn't disappointed. I'm more of a Bobby/Oc person myself, and even though this seems like it may turn into a Jack/Oc, I still like it a lot.

You write really well and your work is funny. Keeps me entertained and all that. The story doesn't drag on either. Nice job! :D
tlm1633
2007-07-09
ch 13,
abuseok all I want to say is...PLEASE UPDATE! even though it took me a year to update mine at least I updated :( so pretty pretty please with a cherry on top update!
rage-ember
2007-05-07
ch 13, anon.
abusePlease, You have to update SOON!! I can't stand waiting, and I need to find out what happens next!! Please, I love your story, Please update SOON!! Thankyou
Sesshoumaru-LiL-Wolfe
2007-05-02
ch 13,
abusei really liek ur story and i can't wait to find out what happens next i hope ya can update soon^_^
jackysgal
2007-04-25
ch 13, anon.
abusei love this story.. your gonna have to get more done ASAP
becki2810
2006-12-25
ch 13,
abuseThis is such a cool story
does jack love maddie, will leah believe maddie
please write more it's a great story

becki
MercerGirl21
2006-11-30
ch 1,
abuseI cant wait for more.
Petey the Pimpin Pirate
2006-10-23
ch 12, anon.
abuseARGH! this story is ** awesome. ARGH! You need to update. I lovwe Jack and Maddy and everywon. there so ** aamzing. *Inner pirate within stretches its arm out and yells ARGH WORLD!* Sorry, I just love this story to itsy bitsy pieces! Keep going or I might go pirate on your **!

Hugs and Kisses
Petey



Argh...
Reeda
2006-10-21
ch 13, anon.
abuseOMG this story is ** awesome, kay? omg, like i ** laughed every ** second. kay? ** THAT! Kay? Like omg like when are you gonna ** update I want a **date right now! (haha, update plus **..get it??...*silence*) Moving on...

Yoo hoo?? Verr arr you?? Do not vurry my dear, I vill find you!! So like, how bout it? Don't know why I asked that but oh well. I'm asuming you know who this is by now...if not...you're ** dense kay?

I bet you're askin yourself right now "WHO DA HELL IS REEDA?"

And I'm saying "I'm REEDA you ** imbecile. Kiss me, I'm Irish and I am doing you mom."

OMG, like, I so ran into Smokay Peaches today...he was smokin cherries but thats beside the point...he said that thmokay jr twill be fired!! *Big Gasp and Sigh* No more smokay and the peaches and the jr...no more of those silly pitchfork dreams...no more ** lions...wait! That came out wrong! Oh dear, I will cry...but NO! i must resist. I'm laughing...but only to stop my tears of despair...Naw, I'm just looking at "** lions" and i really didn't mean for it to come out so wrong...forgive and forget?

Yeah right...2 months from now I'm gonna be like "Hey, wassup?" and you're gonna be like "Nothing...tee hee ** lions" and I'll be like "What" and you'll be like "Uh, nothing, I said I was sucking lemons." (cause, you know, you have like a pocket full of lemons at ALL times...) (okay, maybe just lemon war heads)(eww, my tongue went numb after all those war heads...blech)

Anywho, great chap and all that **...go have fun and please, no lions.

Your dear friend
Reeda

you: "Who the HELL is REEDA?"
Rogue21493
2006-10-05
ch 13,
abuseI really like your story. Please finish it. I want to know what happens. Thanks.
iszgarretthedlund
2006-09-22
ch 13,
abuseomg seriously i fkn love how bobby and maddy acted in the grocery store that is so fkn funny!! argh!! LOL@JACK poor thing!! argh please update soon! i really like your writing!!
WO

iszgarretthedlund
2006-09-22
ch 12,
abusenah i thought it was david!! nice twist tho!!

i like the tampon joke especially how jack reacted haha so cute
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