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| kelticsgirl 2006-10-09 ch 1, | abuseI liked this one too. thank you |
| wraiths-angel 2006-03-11 ch 1, | abuseverygood, enjoyed it alot! |
| krysalys 2006-03-10 ch 1, | abuseWow, angst-o-rama. Yum! Damn I wish Nicky would cut his hair. I love it shorter... looks so much better when it's feathered back. ;) Excellent job. -}-@ Krys |
| crystalpheonix 2006-03-10 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting story, I never thought about this when they showed Nick. You're right, the episode was good, a new take on the show. I loved all those subtle remarks about forensics shows, but the part with Brass was really mean. Anyway, keep writing. |
| thatTaylorgirl 2006-03-09 ch 1, | abusei know a lot of us were wondering about this episode...and well, i thought it was good for what it was. your writing here takes on a new look into what Nick may have experienced... we don't know that Nick even knew about the camera in his "grave"...but the terror of bright lights seems real enough. Assuming Nick's phobia stems from the light...and perhaps a flood of media after the fact (again, assuming he never knew about the webcam) well...what you have here is very real...and well written...though sometimes I find myself struggling a bit with your sentence structure (but VERY minor) this episode...hmm...possibly top five or six for this season so far...i dunno... i think I was hoping for more... glad to see some post-eps coming from it...as expected :) thanks for this one! |
| chrissie0707 2006-03-09 ch 1, | abuseHey! The episode was really great. I was just not expecting that hit to Brass at all. Even my friends, who I made watch it and have never seen the show before (can you believe it?) were like "man, that's harsh". Oh, and they really liked the ep, too. I'm gonna get them hooked! I was starting the think about a one-shot that I could write, because I really thought that they were going to have the camera crew say something like that to Nick. After they said that to Brass, I said "And I thought that they were going to go after Nick." Another opportunity slips through the fingers of the writers. Ah, well, gives us stuff to write about, I suppose. This was a nice little extension of the ep. Good job. |