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| Nearly Indi-cent 2008-07-06 ch 6,  | abuseShe needs to get into his car and they can ride away into the sunset And then have a polyamory with Schu |
| Princess Ren 2006-05-07 ch 6, | abuseSo Rei's enganged!? But to who? Schu? Post soon1 I wanna read more! |
| Lady Light 2006-04-30 ch 6, | abuseHino Junn! *flying kick* |
| AngelLust12387 2006-03-11 ch 5, | abuseAwesome, so you're writing the story now huh? You did a good job with this chapter. The writing style is similar. Yay, they finally meet! Don't leave us hanging too long, keep updating!! |
| thescientist 2006-03-10 ch 5, | abuseahh, yeah it's still in there. it's still similiar to her writing of style and yet it also maintains its own distinctness. anyhoos, you've got me craving me but i like the chapters. they're short and they're cut like scenes out of a movie. it's funny...whenever i write stuff, i always have very specific scenes planned out and then i get stuck and cant find a perfect way to incorporate it. so now that they're wet, what happens next...hmm? and i don't know but i have a very vague idea as to how she ended up out there... Update! |
| Firenze 2006-03-10 ch 5, | abuseyou definitely share the same writing style as bodyfarm, both are very poignant and have beautiful writing. ^ ^ keep up the good work. |
| thebodyfarm 2006-03-10 ch 5, | abusehello, lovely! I love your take on the rain tree scene. I love you. Caterham? isn't that the weird looking car? Youji's car looked vintage, ne? Anyway... Yey. they meet and it's better than I expected. I demand a raunchy love scene! I demand it! hehe... I have a learning problem, remember? I don't know what 'no' means so you better! Raunchy love scene! hehehehe... |
| Boingy 2006-03-09 ch 5, | abuseOh, I'm so happy that someone finally updated this fanfic!! In this chapter, when Rei says 'did he send you?' she means her father right? 'Cuz from what I read in the manga... ehh, it's too long to explain. Anyway, this was a great chapter! Long than the ones before it! (Thank god... I don't think I would've been able to handle a really really short one) Well, update soon and you better not put this story on hiatus anytime soon! |