this story is so damn friggin sweet! and who's eros? i know he's a god, just not sure which one...

Gah. Another amazing story. I wish you could have added in a lemon between Bakura and Ryou as well though. Oh well, awesome nonetheless. Thanks again =D

yay

wow i got interested just by the summaary/ I'm going to start reading now

Awesome story! I really liked it. Very suspesful. :D

This fic is great! You made it well worked out ^^ But I think you didn't mention Bakura raping Ryou effecting their relationshp which you should have in my opinion.I also think Yami would be more shocked when he finds out he's loved by Yugi and not just accept it like that and forget about Ryou. Maybe you should have mentioned Bakura looking at or thinking of Ryou from time to time in the middle chapters because how it worked out it was a little to abrupt but well enough. You never decided how to call "Marik"/"Mariku" ;-) What striked me as well is that Jou is a dumbass in this fic. Well, he's not quite bright, and the other's couldn't see it as well (I still think Ryou would if you would have let him), and I believe you got there characters perfectly well!

mfG
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Yay! This was wonderful, too. I have to admit to being a little sad that Marik and Bakura never got together but the ending was very satisfying anyway. I really love all the parts that sound like they could be quotes only because they are such profound statements. Especially Bakura's "It's not about the life you live. It's how you choose to live it." I know you said you got it from somewhere but there were other ideas throughout the story that were just as beautiful.
So great work once again! Thank you.

I forgot to mention good the Bronzeshippy lemon scene was. Ops. XD

I seriously expected Malik or Ryou to come in when Marik and Bakura kissed. Like a soap opera. O.o Luckily, they didn't or it would've caused more problems.

WAH! SO MUCH PAIN IN THIS FIC!

...I love it. XD

Although I do wish you'd make as much fluffy Psychoshippy scenes as well. T_T They deserve the LOVE!

LOL maybe you could make an alternate ending to this? Maybe Marik could end up with Bakura?

Ahh, me and my awkward suggestions...XD

(I have a cousin, her name's LillyHeart by the way. I made her addicted to your fanfictions ^_~)

Wah! I seriously expected Bakura and Marik to end up together.

WAH! This just adds up to teh angst! T_T

Bakura's emotions were well-expressed and I really do feel for him in their scene.

But I feel good that Bakura loved Marik first instead of the other way around. O.o I dunno...it's just that whenever I read Psychoship fics, it's always Marik the one obsessed with Bakura. At first I was okay with it, but people started overdoing it and breaking Mariku's heart until I eventually felt disgusted. T_T

Here, though! You have no idea HOW GOOD IT FEELS to read a fic with a DIFFERENCE for once!

^_^ You ownz, man. You ownz.

I respect Ryou for loving Bakura but at the same time, for learning when to let him go to pursue his own happiness. Very beautiful, I must say. ^__^

(I am running out of compliments XD)

I like that Malik finally agreed to free Marik.

O_o Damn. I'm having a hard time finding mistakes. You describe everything well.

This chapter was NOT ooc -_-;

And I'm proud to say Bakura's attempts and thoughts were as close to canon as possible. ^^; He really does want Marik, doesn't he? I admire his infantuation. XD

The piece with Marik and Bakura was remarkable. So much psychoshippy goodies... O.o

I've always loved how you portrayed Mariku. Witty, insane, (smexy ~_~) abused (T_T), funny, serious but never an idiot.

O.o Your idea of Mariku's real unique and so far the most interesting in all fics. It's nice to see he still has bits of innocence beneath his evil-ness. Very impressive.

Keep it up! XD

Bakura seems to be taking things (especially Mariku and his promise ^_~) a lot seriously lately. ^^;

Your last sentence was meaningful. A good way to end your chapter and leave us thinking about Mariku's predicament.

(O.o ...did i even understand what i said...)