 Mercy19 2006-03-15 . chapter 1The writing's good and descriptive. Good to see even someone as strong as Trinity has her doubts about being set free and her comparison between the comforting illusion of The Matrix and the discomforts of the Neb plus her worry that The One might not actually be The One.
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