   X-rogan-X 10/27/04 . chapter 4What happened to updating ! |
| BurningDownTheHouse 8/1/04 . chapter 4 This fic is great! No more needs to be said. |
| reviewer of all that is good 6/12/04 . chapter 4 please, please, please write more! |
| Miss Killigrew 3/10/04 . chapter 4 Really good story.
But the rape part confused me at first: Trin said she hadn't cried until this night. So what changed? I mean, why this particular night? I know, she's got Neo now and blabla, but still. She's very strong, i don't believe that after so many years spent alone, she would break down one night without reason.
Except that, great work, congratulations. |
| Trinity 12/15/03 . chapter 4 Maybe you should have somthing where trinity finds that Jayde is out of the matrix and on another ship and they are reunited. |
| The True Shadow 9/24/03 . chapter 4 Please write more! I want to know what happens next. I respect that you don't have much time as I don't have much time either. PLEASE WRITE MORE! |
| Viet-Nu 8/29/03 . chapter 4 Gr8 Fic! Cant wait until the next bit |
| Divamercury 8/3/03 . chapter 4 Believe it or not, that last part actually made sense to me. So...please continue soon!
DM |
| Shadow 7/30/03 . chapter 4 carry on - you're doing great! |
| Ninja Squirrel 6/20/03 . chapter 4 Wo!
Great! Please write more!
You have such a great style.
Sophie x |
| leonsalanna 6/19/03 . chapter 4 This is great except for some reason my computer won't let me view the 3rd chapter. Can you IM me and say what happened? I would appreciate it. My sn is in my profile. |
| siren 6/17/03 . chapter 1 The story idea was so-so (simply because I don't think neo and trinity would behave like immature teenagers after a kiss like that)
but the song has gotta be the most horrible song you could pick, i mean, christina aguilera and ricky martin? you're joking right? shoulda choose gorecki, by lamb. |
| Kiki 6/6/03 . chapter 4 This was really good, this part was hilarious:
“That’s weird. It’s probably got something to do with the fact that you’re the One, so you can change pretty much anything you want in the matrix.”
“Anything?” Neo said with a coy tone in his voice.
Trinity lightly slapped him, “Probably, but don’t get any ideas, there’s no way I’m going on any missions naked.”
Keep up the great work, keep updating please! |
| Kiki 6/3/03 . chapter 4 This fic is so great! Update it or I'll cry... |
| cheekystrawberry 6/3/03 . chapter 4 This is such a cool fic! I'm havin trouble with uploading my own fanfics, can you tell me how to do it?
Reloaded is such a cool film! Totaly wikd!
Please write more? |
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