Lol! How Naraku so swiftly fell under the "spell" was funny.

I had been so busy reading, that I completely forgot to review the last part. ^^ Thanks for reminding. The fic was very funny and amusing. Especially the last part, it really made me crack! As for not changing that part, oh well, not important, it was funny and that's enough. ^^

I'm reading your fic right now, and so far it's funny, but you've got Sesshomaru's title and name mixed up. He's the Lord of the West, not the East. And his name is Sesshomaru or Sesshoumaru. You've forgotten the H (you spelled Sessomaru) that's all!

You are strange...

(^_^)

“SILENCE, WOMAN! We. Eat. Noodle. Now. Understand?”
That line:funny. ^^

Hurrying to obey, she ran to where her bicycle and pack was, passing Sango, who was attempting to slash her wrists with a dead leaf after seeing a particularly Kohaku-like tree.

That line:WRONG. Though in a sick way, funny.

O_O
this
is
FUNNY!
I love Miroku's part with Naraku and Sesshoumaru. With Sesshy I usually read about him with Rin or Inuyasha or Naraku, so Miroku was a change. good change. hilariously good change.
are you sure you're finished?
^-^

wow.. u don't care about definite pairings so long as there's shounen-ai do u 0.o... ... ... I LIKE THE WAY U THINK XD plz keep writting if there's more to come ^^

I don't know what "IC" means, but this chapter, although completely unpredicable, felt it fit in nicely with the entire fic. I loved it! I hope you write many other stories, I will certainly read them.

You sure as HELL didn't mention me in your fic. The inutoolah thing!?! Your first paragraph was really funni! I think I get the fact that if the monk wasn't held against his will, he would have totally not ** that dood. Doody dood. Guys kissing just don't make sense. The only times guys kissing make sense is when Emo's do it, and that's just sad. You know what I mean. Btw you bullshat me, this review is causing me a lot of pain!

As for everything else, I didn't get it.

As per usual :)

lots luv,
chewy.

hahahaha ... poor little Sesshoumaru ...

Yeah, I noticed that ... I was all ... what the hell?

Yeah.

hhahaha, this is so weird and funny. i'm not a huge yaoi fan, but gods, this is way too amusing to pass up. :)

I don't get it :(

But it sounds great.

I'm tired.

At least there wasn't any bum banging. *shudder*

love ja,
jess.

Great chapter. A bit short though. I look forward to the next chapter

hahahaha, funny stuff

Lol hey Kaz, this chapter was actually really really good. Despite the yaoi crap you've got going on, you got funni parts :D AND NO TYPOS! ..that I can remember. Yeah, you did kind of ramble on in that chap, but I suppose then again you always ramble on.

Voila, I have reviewed, but not out of the love of yoai.
Out of the responsibility of being best friend.

Love ja,
Jess.
(btw I dropped your Zen into the toilet)