Oh my. I'm almost a hundred percent sure I reviewed this before. Sorry! In any case, this was a fantastic story. I love the depth of character, and the smooth, almost dark and sultry feel of this fic. Ah, you are a fantastic author, m' dear. Cloud and Leon stay perfectly in character, even though the two of them going at it like that isn't canon. *cough* it should be *cough* I love your style, your plot and really, the fic as a whole. Nice work here. I'm very glad I read this.

o.o I love this little one-shot so much! You write so well!

This one-shot is amazing. I like the way you discribe the moments between Leon and Cloud. Yes, I agree with you. We need to spread the CLC community! Also, religious studies, yes I tend to sleep in that class as well. I do not mean to, but when I am tired from writing a research paper it is the perfect class to doze off( I am going to hell as well).

~Forsyte

You are an amazing author, and I absolutely loved this small story... I have to read Flame... as I am (right now) freaking out because I want to know what happens!

I really do envy your writing skills. You're so descriptive. Every little thing is made into something more. It's so hard not to be drawn in to reading the rest of the fic. You have a very unique style. It's so flowing. You hardly use any speech to move the story along; I, for one, do this too much. Reading through this, I couldn't find any mistakes. It was pretty much flawless. It was so well-written, and a great idea. I hope to become as great an author as you one day.

Keep writing.

~Xephlyn

Hell, that's all!? Update soon, please?

Heh heh...

I liked it! Though the thought of Cloud walking off like that and leaving Leon standing there made me sad! Please post the other two chapters! I hope it ends happily!

I love this story! XD I don't care if there's close to no smut in the following would-be chapters! Please continue!

I liked it very much. I really don't know if I want to read the rest if you post it. It makes an exellent one-shot..but I'm kinda left wondering.

But anyways, I really did like it., not sure if my opinion matters, but its there.

~Soul of The Wind
AKA
Vivi

Such a pretty yet sad fic! ;.; ... *hearts* I love it!!

please please please keep writing! i would love to read more of this! smut or no smut! nice practice smut by the way ^^ anywho must dash tata

My goodness! KEEP WRITING! Smut or no smut, I must know what happens D: D: D: it must be happy or else I'll get ulcers.

Arakni: This is pretty good. But... does Cloud love Leon? Does he not? I'm a bit confused. I think he does... but I'm not sure. Oh, well. Just post the rest of this story.
And, hey, what challenges do you mean? 'Emulsion (what does that mean, anyways?)? 'Steam'?

Wow, this story is amazing, I had tears in my eyes. I really hope you do chose to add more to this ^^

That was cruel.

Amazing.

Great.

And very pretty to my brain.

But cruel.