Very wonderful, cute, sweet, and SO TRUE.
Ma, that kid drowns way too much.
Lovely work!

this story is so sweet and it gets to me every time. seriously i love it. it is so sweet and bitter too because you know not forever. ;o(

this is fantastic. im honestly so surprised that good aaml fics seem to get ignored. this deserves many, many more positive reviews.

This was great too! My only regret is that Ash and Misty didn't kiss, but they don't have to to express their love for each other. Great job!

sincerely,
evan, a fan of aaml -EVAN AAML

Tha was such a nice story. i love how you wrote it. Nice work:)

oh, wow! what can i say? you are an awesome author. it's that simple. for example:

He shifted and the blanket slipped down off of one of his shoulders. He sat his cup on the table before them in order to readjust it.

one of those random, unimportant little details that completely makes the story. go random details!

btw, i just read your profile and discovered that you like harry potter. well, my friends and i share an account (i'm coco, and too lazy to log in) called misshapen stories. you should read both of the stories on it - know your harry potter stars and dracolocks strikes back. and drop a review, too, please!

Aw! This is so sweet! You're a very talented writter- keep it up!

i like the last part, with the forever comment and misty agreeing even though she didn't really know what was said...but we know! haha. this is sweat. really sweat. thanks for the good read.

This is a cute and sad story. Please make some more. Ash and Misty forever.

Your story is very nice ^^ ... I like very much!

luv it. thats all i can say

aw this was so sweet, i loved it!

Wow! That was good! I enjoyed this story.
Thank god Misty didn't smack Ash, heehee and i must admit the ending was cute of Misty and Ash sleeping like on each other. Very cute!!
Luved it and u did a great job!