I love this story it really captures how the races look at each other. It sad that no one but me has read and reviewed this. You did a really good job on it the only thing I noticed was that some of your dialouge could use more description.

Anyway I am planning to write some Wraith the Oblivion fanfic it was a old White Wolf game I don't even know if you have heard of it. But I will make a deal with you, I am afraid my Wraith storys won't get read so how about I read any White Wolf fan fiction you write if you read any I write?