Woohoo! Chapter 40! I love what happened and I can't wait for the next update! Though how everyone will react to her and to what Daisy and Luigi did once she gets home is sorta what I'm waiting for. Update soon/when you can!

OH CRAP I MEANT PLEASE FOR THE BELOW REVIEW PLZ FORGIVE MEH

Never fail to dissapoint ;)

Great chapter! Bowser was funny as ever, and Peach was so sweet (I almost thought she'd finally say something other than "I know", but I guess we'll have to wait a little longer for that). I really liked how this chapter focused almost entirely on Bowser and Peach; the Koopaling bit almost seemed like filler, but it was still a good way to transition from the night to the morning (I can totally picture Lemmy's demonic face in the dark - it's fun how something can be so cute and yet so scary as well).

Keep up the good work!

The Bad:
I feel absolutely bummerificly tiddlely-widdlely sick.

The Good:
Change of Heart updated! :D
O my stomach...lol

Good chapter, it really was almost like what I put down in the review before :D.
So glad it didn't turn sour ;), and I'm glad that your writing is still as awesome (but even better) then when you began your story!
I'd write more but my mind is still out in the great beyond...argh.
Thanks for updating!
~mariosonic

This is my new favorite chapter!! I was going to write a huge review but I'm lost for words. It was everything I love about this story nicely fit into one chapter.
I can hardly wait for the next chapter.

Cool. Yes we can be patient. Cute chapter

That was such an amazing chapter. I love how Peach is slowly but surely starting to realize her feelings. Don't apologize for taking too long, it's well worth the wait. Thank you for starting and keeping with the story.

Well, I can certainly say I'm happy with it. This chapter wasn't as funny as the last few, but it made up for it with the romance, and a few underhanded bits of comedy thrown in. I like it a lot.

I can honestly say I am VERY glad Peach didn't choose that gown that probably would've shown WAY too much cleavage. How'd that even get in there, anyway? Oh wait. Bowser. Nevermind.

But yeah, I really enjoyed this chapter, especially the bit with Larry and Lemmy. Very nicely done.

I like this fic. It makes me happy even when bad things happen. So thank you! ^_^

Sincerely,

Psycho

NO! Peach is leaving! I had gotten so used to the sweet fluffiness between her and Bowser, I hope there will be more soon after. Peach seems so close to admitting her feelings, and the little sleep-over with Bowser and her has been oner of my favorite moments of all! Your commitment to this story is great, keep it going! I can't wait to hear what happens next!!^^

The new chapter is here! :D Seeing the alert email always makes me happy. You have a break in November? Other than the Thanksgiving holiday. Awesome!

Peach's getting ready for bed procedures were amusing and how she messed up the cream at the end and kicked the dress into the bathroom. All those little details add realism to the story.

I'll admit I won't be able to resist the urge to laugh at the shell-less Bowser mostly because he's making a big deal out of it. I be Ludwig would look cute in pajamas, i imagine him in light blue pajamas with dark blue musical notes. He would also be easier to glomp like that. (Albeit also easier to accidentally crush him.)

Pillow fights are a classic sleepover activity. :D It had to be there and I'm happy it was. ^_^

The story of Superkoopa and Koopis Lane and their time and continuities was hilarious. XD

Peach's comment about Bowser being soft was adorable. Such a cute awakening and I can totally imagine Bowser enjoying Peach accidentally hitting him. He would love any form of contact from her.

I think I caught some of what was new and what was written long ago. But I remember reading some scenes from the fiction group site and at the time there were already quite a few chapters and your style had evolved so I could see the differences since the styles weren't mixed together. Maybe that helped pick it out a little now, but honestly it all blends in nicely so it's hard to tell which is old and which is new without as many hints as possible. Looking forward to the next one. Wow 40 chapters, that feels like a really big number, doesn't it? It is, but it's like until you get the zero as the second digit, it doesn't sink in.

why why why must you do that. i reall though he was going to kiss her.Really so many times. that's not fair you know. But its a good chapter and atlesast she realises she will miss him

Oh my f*gosh. I love this chapter. It almost made me freaking cry. :'( Well... fluffy-amazingness. You are a fantastic writer! Really can't wait for the last few chappies~ :)
P.S. I really like BowserXPeach now in the right context. <3

Hi there! Name's Psycho, and I'm a big fan of this fic!

I've been reading this since it only had 5 chapters in 06, and I've never been disappointed in it.

First, let me get something important off my chest. I love the way you write the Koopalings and Junior. It makes them seem more family-like, instead of some of the fics I've read, which depict Junior either being hated by the other seven for some reason or another, or having Junior be all alone. I don't like either option really, but you manage to make these 8 work, with no one Koopaling depicted as more important than the other, with all of their quirks, flaws, and personalities being highlighted and shown prominently.

Although I must confess that I'm a tad saddened by the fact that Larry's considered the mechanical genius in the Koopalings instead of Iggy, but this was probably written before Superstar Saga, so I have no real reason to complain. Still, I'm impressed with how you handle those little rascals...Makes me want to get Super Mario World and Super Mario Bros. 3 again. Heh.

Now for the main focus of my praise. The romance between Bowser and Peach, as well as with Luigi and Daisy, progresses at a realistic rate that I'm incredibly happy with. I've seen quite a few fics where things change from, "ONOEZ I'M KIDNAPPED!!" to "HEY BOWSER'S HOT OMG!" in the length of a chapter. I can't begin to tell you how pleased I am with the way you fine folks handle it.

As for Mario...Well, I wonder how he'll take this...And if he'll hook up with either Meredith or Toadette...But that's a matter for waiting.

Speaking of that, the minor romances are very nice as well. From Kamek/Kammy to those two congress people from the first few chapters, the romance is taken seriously and slowly, which I just find very nice.

The action is very well done, as is the descriptions for everything, from the locations, to the landscape, to people's emotions, EVERYTHING makes you feel like you're really IN the story. It's like the concept of immersion in a videogame, and it's never broken, which makes the fic about 100x more well-written and awesome.

I do have one small criticism though. I've noticed that in many places in the fic, Koopalings is spelled without the "a". I know I'm just being a grammar nazi, but that kind of thing is important to me, so I thought I'd let you folks know. That's my only gripe though.

Whoa...2550 letters. This is my longest review yet! Keep up the good work folks, nad I'll be sure to read every chapter EVAR! ^_^

Sincerely,

Psycho the Hedgehog.

Hee hee, Kamek and Kammy...old people acting like children.

I'm looking forward to seeing the vacation in Grand Canal, it'll be great to bring on the drama and move everything along.

Speaking of moving along, I can't believe Bowser and Peach are going to sleep in the same room. I wonder if either of them snore or sleeptalk/sleepwalk, lol.

Happy birthday, and keep it up!