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Walkazo
2009-12-03 . chapter 41
Great chapter, as always. My favorite line was Toadsworth's "Toadette, you and the King are in charge until I get back." - typical Toadsworth; and funny to boot! Peach's dad is also a fun character - much more lovable than Daisy's old man. I also liked how Kammy made sure to inflect pain as well as pleasure on poor old Kamek when she held his hand: there's no doubt who wears the pants in that relationship.

I was a bit worried that Junior had sneaked aboard the plane when he wasn't at Peach's goodbye and would case some sort of dramatic scene when they land in the Mushroom Kingdom, so I was relived that he was safe at home. But I can't help wondering what IS going to happen; either there's going to be a big emotional showdown, or it'll come to a gentle close... I can't wait to find out which it is!
Shadow Koopa
2009-12-02 . chapter 41
:3
Red One1223
2009-12-01 . chapter 41
Hate it when that happens. I thought I turned in an essay once to this one site, I didn't even see or hit the submit button because I thought it was done. Anyways, great chapter as usual, hope you update again soon. I almost thought that Junior was going to sneak onto the plane and stay with Peach for the new few chapters when we didn't see him to say goodbye at the airport.
iluvsheepies
2009-12-01 . chapter 41
Aw... poor koopalings...
Arg... SO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT CHAPPY! :D
You kind of underused Ludwig in this one, that's all I'm gonna mention... :(
I kind of have a love affair for him though, so maybe I'm just over-reacting.
Are you ever gonna mention what Peach said to the Koopalings, or... was it just kind of...
to show the effect Peach'd had on their lives? That they meant that much to her?
Anyways, fantastic story you have. <3
Sarifina Filth
2009-12-01 . chapter 41
WHAT?!?!?!?
How come YOU get a cool paragoomba keychain? I want a cool paragoomba keychain!
Ah, how can you not love Toadsworth with his constant fretting over Peach? Oh Toadette, poor, little Toadette. She's so confused. Those poor phones, murdered by Toadsworth and his toad accomplices!
Yup, I bet that little cheek smootchie woke Luigi right up!
*thinks about it and bursts out in giggles*
That boo annoys me. How does he know what Peach feels?!? She can miss them if she wants to miss them! And they aren't complete strangers, she's known them for... a whole... week... WELL WHATEVER! I still don't think that meanie face should say she doesn't REALLY like Valkoopy, I really liked them as friends! *pouts* *(and yes, I do enjoy ranting)
I'm so lame, I actually started laughing when I read "I'll panash your pupose!" WOW I'm lame! XP
I also thought the part was halarious where Bowser mentioned that night and Peach was all like "everyone will be confused!
^v^
Man, I stink at continuations! But I'm glad we get to see why there was a pickle in the grass, that bbothered me SO much! I thought the room was completely random and for some strange reason in the middle of your fanfic, but I suppose it DID serve some purpose!
I LOVED the was you did her last conversation with the koopalings. No matter what you wrote for what she said them, you couldn't really make it perfect, the words she says. But this way, our minds'll fill in the blanks with not actual words but the idea of a perfect reply! ABSOLUTELY GENIUS! Couldn't have done it better myself!
I wonder if one of the assistants that went to the plane to give their farewells is that creepy, perverted, clueless, stalker spider? I really liked him! I was kinda hoping to see him talk more! T^T
I imagine the plane ride back will be rather awkward. Neither really knowing what to say. Hehe, Go Kammy and Kamek! Bringing those koopalings back to life! Though it seems like it's going to get rather expensive! ^-^
YES! I can't wait for the next chapter! 42! The answer to life itself!
I only wish you weren't planning to make it so short...

Your overly-eager reader/reveiwer,
~Sarifina Filth
MikariStar
2009-12-01 . chapter 41
I just remembered something (totally random I know) What was the name of the koopa troopa spy, the one I thought was cool. I remembered him but forgot his name and I'm pretty sure he had one, I'm just too lazy to go back and look it up. I was wondering what happened to him. ^^;; I know, my memory throws things out at random sometimes.

King Toadstool withe the mop was hilarious! XD

The messenger toad's report also made me laugh. ^^

Funny how Toadsworth is directing everything and ordering everyone around even telling the king what to do. XD

The koopalings are so adorable! ^_^

You know how I write reviews as I read... That thing with koopa spy was totally random and I typed it before I started reading the actual chapter because I remembered it when I saw the new chapter alert and thought I should mention it. Then I get to the ending notes and see your message about past situations, etc. :o
Psycho the Hedgehog
2009-11-30 . chapter 41
Ah, another wonderful chapter. First off, let me get something out of the way.

Are you going to make Iggy's hair green, like it is in New Super Mario Bros. Wii? Like, he just dyed it rainbow for some reason? Ah well.

I can't wait to see how things go in the next few days for the princess...I REALLY don't want to this to turn out similar to another Bowser/Peach story on this site "Year of the Wiggler", which shares a few story elements, but I'm just hoping that this doesn't just go like that in the end.

I REALLY wanna know what Peach said to the Koopalings. Curiosity has me in it's crazy grip! ONOEZ!

So, yeah, really loving it, and I look forward to the next chapter! Keep it up, plz!
Saya Moonshadow
2009-11-15 . chapter 40
OK, now that 's letting me review stuff again, I shall!

(...stupid site...)

I don't think Peach is gonna be able to deny her feelings for him for much longer - she is DEFINITELY feelin' the love tonight, FER SURE. I think even Bowser's aware of it by now too...then again, Bowser would still love her even if he thought she didn't like him. For all his faults, he's got a lot of good points, and loyalty seems to be one of them. Not to mention his sense of humor, which never fails to make me laugh in this fic XD

And, awh, Larry! That Koopaling is too cute for his own good, seriously. I practically squealed at the image of him under the covers with a lantern and a book XD I'm glad to see that he hasn't forgotten his mother (despite never really knowing her), but it's also good to see how attached he is to Peach.

Phwa, now you've gone and made me sad with that analogy to Superkoopa D: Poor kids...they really do want their dad to be happy, and a lot of that is their own personal happiness too - they want a mom. But the ending line of that section made me smile. They're all good kids, really, if a little rowdy XD

Haha, oh Bowser. You and your sense of humor XD Even if nothing dirty happened, he's still ecstatic that he got to just hold her. Why does that thought make me smile so hard? XD And he kind of has a point in the last part there - he DID sleep with her, but if the people he tells take it the wrong way, not his fault, right? Sort of XD

But yes, this chapter was a lot of fun to read =) I'll certainly be sorry to see this fic end, although I'm sure you've got a lot more in store before that happens. Hope to see an update soon!
Red One1223
2009-11-06 . chapter 40
Woohoo! Chapter 40! I love what happened and I can't wait for the next update! Though how everyone will react to her and to what Daisy and Luigi did once she gets home is sorta what I'm waiting for. Update soon/when you can!
Shadow Koopa
2009-11-06 . chapter 2
OH CRAP I MEANT PLEASE FOR THE BELOW REVIEW PLZ FORGIVE MEH
Shadow Koopa
2009-11-06 . chapter 40
Never fail to dissapoint ;)
Walkazo
2009-11-06 . chapter 40
Great chapter! Bowser was funny as ever, and Peach was so sweet (I almost thought she'd finally say something other than "I know", but I guess we'll have to wait a little longer for that). I really liked how this chapter focused almost entirely on Bowser and Peach; the Koopaling bit almost seemed like filler, but it was still a good way to transition from the night to the morning (I can totally picture Lemmy's demonic face in the dark - it's fun how something can be so cute and yet so scary as well).

Keep up the good work!
mariosonic
2009-11-06 . chapter 40
The Bad:
I feel absolutely bummerificly tiddlely-widdlely sick.

The Good:
Change of Heart updated! :D
O my stomach...lol

Good chapter, it really was almost like what I put down in the review before :D.
So glad it didn't turn sour ;), and I'm glad that your writing is still as awesome (but even better) then when you began your story!
I'd write more but my mind is still out in the great beyond...argh.
Thanks for updating!
~mariosonic
Deanna625
2009-11-06 . chapter 40
This is my new favorite chapter!! I was going to write a huge review but I'm lost for words. It was everything I love about this story nicely fit into one chapter.
I can hardly wait for the next chapter.
James Birdsong
2009-11-06 . chapter 40
Cool. Yes we can be patient. Cute chapter
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