Reviews for Gone But Not Forgotten

Reviews For: Gone But Not Forgotten

Multani 2007-11-22 ch 4, anon.	abuseVery nice story man. I hope you write another chapter as I really want to know what happens to helios.
Whitechapel 2006-06-14 ch 3,	abuseWell--! The story took a turn I hadn't anticipated. Interesting interplay and dialogue, as always, though; your canon characters were in character, and the OCs fit in well. I think I've mentioned that already, but I wanted to say it again. Your characters are the strongest part of your stories; that can be difficult to do--dialogue is especially hard to do realistically--and you deserve credit for it. I'm sorry to hear that you won't be able to continue. I intend to be around a while still, so if you come back please be sure to look me up again. If I've gone, my friend also writes for this site; his pen name is Ruainin Teilene, and I think he writes in the Suikoden list these days. You can reach me through him--I'd like to read the rest of this someday.
GuyverZero 2006-06-09 ch 3,	abusegood chapter. though the fact that it may not continue suxs. anyways hope you do finish it 1 day. good luck. KnightX
GuyverZero 2006-03-30 ch 2,	abusehappy to see a new chapter it was good hope u can keep this level of writing up. good luck
liyca 2006-03-30 ch 1,	abuseWow that was really good im glad you wrote thet it was really good and im gonna have to read the next chapter now.
Whitechapel 2006-03-30 ch 2,	abuseHelios is developing into quite an interesting character, indeed. Is there something special about him that allows him to place so little importance on personal injuries, or is it just garden-variety toughness? :) I think Kid is pretty much in character, and remembering to use her way of talking makes her that much better. As far as constructive criticism, there were a few misplaced commas, especially within the compound sentences. There weren't any spelling errors that I could see (and props to you for that), however, and the construction of the story was sound, as well. Overall, this is shaping up into quite a good story. Please update again soon.
Whitechapel 2006-03-24 ch 1,	abuseI think this is very ambitious of you, to write Forever Zero and then to come up with a side-story as well. I intend to keep up with both, since I am quite interested in what happens next. I just have one question: the name Helios has etymological connections with the Greek word for the Sun...is that deliberate on your part? I am intrigued...please update soon.
GuyverZero 2006-03-12 ch 1,	abusei haven't read forever zero yet but i plan on it now.can't wait 2 see whats diffrent.good luck

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