Loved your poem a lot, it's wonderful :)

Voices of a Distant Star is so underrated, its so wonderful and yet so many people dont know about it. Sigh. Great poem by the way, i can imagine this being her thoughts.

This is so beautiful! It's so simple, yet so captivating. I loved it! In fact, in inspired a video, which I am now currently making...

Wonderfully written... Mikako's emotions were captured so perfectly in this poem.

I have no real love of poems at all, saying that your voices of a distant star tribute really hit the mark. Good effort

It certainly isn't bad, but it also seems very... repetitive. It goes through much of what is already stated in his/her final soliloquy, so it seems more of a transcript than anything else.

In terms of poetic design, it isn't the most startlingly unique, but poetic motif is not the point of it, I presume.

Overall, I say it's fairly well-done.

I love this movie and I think your poem catches her final (maybe) thoughts perfectly.

very nice