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AEDReaper
2009-07-25 . chapter 1
amzing.
Aya
2009-03-29 . chapter 1
Beautiful, very IC.
Don't Use Anymore.
2008-11-03 . chapter 1
A good portrayal of Misa.
FFYP-det-Yagami
2008-08-11 . chapter 1
That would explain L saying that he could fall for Misa... XD
RoseyRedblood
2008-07-23 . chapter 1
Neat write more please!
LilyGinnyBlack
2008-06-06 . chapter 1
A-MA-ZING! *0* Comparing Misa Misa to candy, and then having that contradiction at the end...gods I loved how this ended, those last lines were amazing:

And if Light isn't particularly sweet to her, well, isn't that the way it's supposed to be? Candy is meant to be devoured, bitten and chewed. She doesn't care if he bites her in two.

It sums up, not only Misa Misa's character, but also the relationship her and Light had with one another. It is really quite a sadening thing, which is another aspect of this piece that I wanted to point out. The way you used such childish and innocent words; "sweet", "candy", "pretty", and etc. all of which give this lovely and cute impression. Yet, the true nature of this fic is truly horrible and highly depressing.

I adored it though! ^-^ As a last note, the flow of the whole piece was like poetry at times, one sentence mixing right into the next. Thank you for writing this and please take care! ^^

~Lily~
MistariaPotter
2008-03-28 . chapter 1
short, but really strong.
Goku's Daughter
2008-03-02 . chapter 1
Short but sweet, like candy.

I like! =)

GD
NorthernLights25
2008-03-01 . chapter 1
That was a little sad.
C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only
2008-03-01 . chapter 1
Wow...Sickly true, deep, and emotional. LUV IT!
pandora029
2007-02-09 . chapter 1
I'm not a Misa fan, but you wrote this REALLY well and I enjoyed it alot bacause of that. You're a great writer.
annah
2007-01-15 . chapter 1
that was deep
very good

deathnote is the bestest!
openwindow3
2007-01-04 . chapter 1
it makes so much ** sense. how tragic. awesome fic though.
RJPC
2006-11-25 . chapter 1
Wow that's really interesting!
fledgling
2006-06-18 . chapter 1
Very interesting take on Misa. Loved the metaphors. Brilliant little piece.
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