Great story! You've got the character dynamics down. I hope you'll be doing more Johnny stories soon!

That was a very good and realistic story. I've actually seen people drive into accident scenes causing more trouble as they rubber neck. And I've heard of officers and EMS people and tow truck drivers getting hurt or killed by drivers who can't pay attention. Well done and thanks for sharing your story.

Very nice. I like the title too!

love it

The story was interesting and very laid out and I liked it a lot.

Ah, you do write lovely angst. I enjoyed this one quite a bit, particularly when Roy is reassured that by keeping Johnny on his feet he has done just what he needed to do. And I love the irony that Johnny got hurt because he was trying to get his helmet!

Thanks for a fun read!

Good story, nicely done.

This was a great story. I really enjoyed it. It really showed the relationship between the two partners and the rest of the crew. And the concern for all that Johnny's career would be over was sincere.

I hope you keep writing.

I really liked the story. I only caught one little "oops", and I might not have caught that,except I work in the medical field. Nurses don't do physical therapy. That's the job of a physical therapist. Two jobs that are more different than you might imagine. The story's still good, though.

Great story! Only Johnny can end up in these situations!

Dixie / Joni