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   Vivaldi Requiem 8/12/06 . chapter 4sigh...Ap...wrong grammar in.."F-F-F-Felix! You're Jenna's sister?" Isaac asked." its supposedly "F-F-F-Felix! You're Jenna's brother?" but still...me likey story |
| Vivaldi Requiem 8/12/06 . chapter 1 Um...AP?...there's one tensy mistake...fighted should be fought over...and the story's good. |
| The One True Koneko 6/19/06 . chapter 5 I love all those pairings! Hope you write a sequal. |
| illumnity06 4/30/06 . chapter 5 Go Gaia! Pretty funny and many fluffy parts, xD! Keep up the good work! |
| Lfishy 4/18/06 . chapter 5 aww...so kawaii. very cute. i loved it. my last review says all about your flaws. i'd like to say that these confessions were a bit abrupt. it was all kinda like, "i love you too." maybe you could have developed the love that formed between the characters when they were taking a walk. other than that, very nice job for a first fic. i applaude. very nicely done. Lilikoifish P.S. hope my reviews aren't too harsh! |
| Lfishy 4/18/06 . chapter 4 great. magnificent. i'm so sorry i didn't notice the updates... anyway, i found a few errors in your punctuation. take this quote for example: "No. I can't really read in the dark" Isaac smiled. this is a problem you have with every statement...i'm going to fix it so that you never have to be bothered by this again. that quote should be: "No. I can't really read in the dark," Isaac smiled. notice the comma right before the last quotation mark. that's all. other than that, just more description. great job! Lilikoifish |
| Denwa 4/16/06 . chapter 1 Oh! It's you again! I reviewed The Tale of Four Scepters. Well, I guess the storyline is great, but you should have paragraph format on, or else it looks like a big blob o' words. XD Goob job! |
| saskk 4/4/06 . chapter 5 pretty funny! full o ! ! ! good one anyways ap! |
| saskk 4/4/06 . chapter 3 ah! the fluff! the fluff eats me... hehehehehe kepp goin ap! |
| Star wars makeover 4/3/06 . chapter 5 HIYA THIS WAS GREAT |
| Niwani 4/3/06 . chapter 5 Aww... Cute! CUTE! I must draw that scene! -Runs off starts drawing- |
| Niwani 4/3/06 . chapter 4 I got confused at the begining again, but it was probably my own fault... The only little mistake was: "F-F-F-Felix! You're Jenna's sister?" Isaac asked. Others, it was good. |
| illumnity06 4/2/06 . chapter 4 GAIA! Sorry for not reviewing...hihihi...i only logged in 5 mins ago...XP Just wanted to say...pls write some more! hihihi...I really like reading it over and over especially the forsest kind of thingy... TY! PS. It's only 3 days since the school year was over but still I already want to go to school again! I miss u guys! T_T Illumnity06 |
| Niwani 4/1/06 . chapter 3 Aww... I Couldn't stop smiling! CUTE! |
| Lfishy 3/31/06 . chapter 3 wow...that was short. XD but sweet. short, but sweet. loved that. very kawaii. _ yay! your changed your format! yay! my eyes don't hurt anymore! all hail gaia09! yay! i think that you explained the kiss very nicely. very tender, if you get what i mean. you didn't have them like making out, but just a tender kiss. very nicely done. i like the short but sweet! be sure to make the next chapter longer, and explain more memories. other than that, all i would recommend is a BIT more description. just a meager amount, okay? _ "an error doesn't become a mistake unless you refuse to correct it." great job! Lilikoifish |
