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RoxasIsReal13
2008-01-11
ch 1,
abuseI cried... I really truly cried. Beautifully done but I suppose you won't continue it huh?
digi-writer1392
2007-07-22
ch 1,
abuseThis story was amazing! I couldn't stop crying! In fact, I'm still crying! I wish you'd write the story of what happens to Kouichi after he returns to the human world, but you probably won't. I give this story 11 stars out of 10!
Organization 13 Members 0
2007-02-15
ch 1,
abuseall i can say is this story is so sad and beautiful and just heartbreaking and and... i love you and hate you for this story, it's wonderfully sad, but it gives you alot of something i can't name right now ... so i'll leave it at that.
TheDudeLordOfFantasy
2007-02-02
ch 1,
abuseI loved it. It was so perfectly done and the ending made sense. I kinda want you to start a new fic about what happens with Kouichi and the new kids, but it said END so i dont want to get my hopes up. The only thing that bothered me a little bit was way back in the begnning where you said that Kouji died from Carbon Dioxide...um...you can die from Carbon Monoxide poisoning usually not from Dioxide...yea sorry i'm picky and found it extremly funny(dont ask i'm a science obsessor).

beautiful work...as always

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TheDudeLordOfFantasy a.k.a. Kathleen
Kaori-Kiada
2006-12-23
ch 1,
abuseOMG I've got chills from reading this. good work!
Higuchimon
2006-12-05
ch 1,
abuseI don't think it's possible to say this any other way than "BAWLING MY EYES OUT!".
Usagi Sohma 83
2006-11-28
ch 1,
abuseis there going to be a sequel? I love this story! it made me cry!
Vaporeone
2006-11-18
ch 1,
abuseOkay, I read this story this past spring and cried the first time I read it. I forgot about this story until I became antagonizingly angsty again and this is probably my 3rd time reading it. x.x
'The Last' is written in such a manner that readers can easily empathize with Kouichi, and not once has Kouichi nor any of the other Frontier kids truly run out of character.
I'm actually inspired to write my own type of story, of a girl who wouldn't die (for another reason) even though she has tried multiple times to kill herself.
Thank you for capturing the extreme angst of one who had nearly lost hope. And may your days continue to be bright and sunny.
kai
2006-11-18
ch 1, anon.
abusebrilliant is there gonna be a sequel?
SumireMayonaka
2006-09-09
ch 1,
abusei cried reading this story. when i read it for the first time, i can't say how i felt. so angsty! *sniffs* i liked the start, the way it throws you in, and make you want to read more. poor kouichi...man i feel so depressed for him in that story.
BestFanOfAnime
2006-08-02
ch 1,
abuseI think you're crazy. Everyone died. And tha'ts kinda stupid. NO FLAMES, KAY?
Light's Blue Blossom
2006-07-05
ch 1,
abuseO.O WOW, it was soo sad and depressing but really really good!
ChOcoLAte lUVr
2006-06-24
ch 1,
abuseThat is probably the saddest thing I have ever read...poor Kouichi...so much angst!This is going on my favourite stories list!
Gwydion
2006-03-30
ch 1,
abuseMy gosh, that was some nice, well written, tear jerking angst. Seriously, so sad, but I loved it. I am a huge sucker for the more depressing stories, and this one was so fresh and different. Despite how heart wrenching the concept of him not being able to die is, it really adds to the story. The concept may be science fiction, but the idea of not everything working out all rose colored and happy in the end is very real. A wonderful touch, and one that had me holding back tears. Absolutely beautiful story - definately added to my short list of favorites. (I'll have to thank my friend for recommending I read your fics.)
daughter of the sphinx
2006-03-29
ch 1,
abuseThat was so sad! I nearly cried! Kouichi's all alone now, isn't he?
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