OMG I just love how you write it..! *_*

looking forward to the next chapter keep it up!

wow...-is spechless- awesome story i really have no idea what else to say and i love Albels attitude, ive never played the game but he is just so lovely! and i like the insults he throws at the people!

oh oh oh and is Albel Fayts desire?

continue .

I'd really like to see this continued! *adds to alerts*

This sounds really good! Update soon!

*gives a cookie*

Very good so far, I look forward to later chapters.

"Oh? Don't tell me you were scared by a stupid woman in pink, of all colors?"

...says the man with the purple skirt. :P

More please! Love this story SO much!

Ah! I know you as an author on the AlbelxFayt livejournal community! I had no idea that you were an author here, too... wow, I love your stories! they're so good!

Very interesting story you have here! It pleases me how well you keep Albel and Fayt in character. I wonder just what the illusion-Albel was talking about that Fayt can't seem to remember. I almost wanted to cry when you said Albel looked disappointed in Fayt. V_V Can't wait for the next update! :)

Moshi Moshi Mai

Wonderful! Absolutely wonderful! I loved all the illusions and twists in this story because it really made it interesting. Also the pairing of Albel and Fayt was a nice touch. You should consider writing more of these fics! I know for sure that I will read them! (_)

Great story, I like the long chapters

I love your story it was really nice.

I hope you will update soon can't wait

It has a really good story in it.

Good luck with this story and others if

you are writhing them. Love the pair AlbelxFayt

they are so sweet together. :3

-Erim-