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| giveGodtheglory 2006-09-29 ch 9,  | abusePoor Jubee. You catch her so well. God bless! g |
| XxFleurdelySxX 2006-04-30 ch 8, | abuseAww, Scott. Poor thing. How can he be an X-men if he can't see a thing? If only he was a telepath, it would help. |
| XxFleurdelySxX 2006-04-30 ch 7, | abuseOh I like this version of Storm joining the team. "A young man in Washington was killed by his father when it was discovered he had wings." Aww, jeez, I guess that means I won't be seeing Warren in this. Aww :P the poor kids. |
| XxFleurdelySxX 2006-04-30 ch 6, | abuse"If he had steepled his fingers and laughed maniacally he would have been a textbook villain." Hahaha! So true. He always steeples his darn fingers, already. And aww, Wolvie was already taking care of Jubilee. How sweet. |
| XxFleurdelySxX 2006-04-30 ch 5, | abuseokay, finally. FF.N died while I was reading and I couldn't review anymore... Anyway, weird chapter, isn't it? I like Bobby and Hank a lot, but this wasn't my thing, I like descriptions best. |
| XxFleurdelySxX 2006-04-27 ch 4, | abuseAw, Betsy... This was so sad. |
| XxFleurdelySxX 2006-04-27 ch 3, | abuseThat story was very confusing, I'll admit. Perhaps you should try more descriptions, and smaller paragraphs, to make sure the reader follows your thoughts correctly. I was lost by the time I got to the end of the second scene, and I'm still not very sure what happened exactly. It's the only problem, really; your writing is still very good, and so are your ideas. |
| XxFleurdelySxX 2006-04-27 ch 2, | abuseWhat's this, 8 chapters and no review? Oh how I despise readers who can take time for reading, but not for appreciating. I like this a lot, it's funny, and it's always nice to see fanfics about characters who don't get much. That and Betsy, of course. Dear Betsy, me love. On to the next story. |