Great job on this...I love the two of them together and I bet they were both pretty stubborn at the start of the relationship. That was a nice touch having Louie flirt with her and Danny push him away!

Muwahaha I loved it, it was sad and then romantic you write well!

I read this over at the D/L Forum as well. I thought it was just as good the second time! :)

omg i want to cry well im am crying that was so sad!but it was really really good i enjoyed it! and dannt and lindsay are together! that was really good well done!

Angst is a beautiful thing isn't it. I can see Lindsay comforting Danny if anything happened. How sweet.

A kiss in the heat of the moment is a great thing too. I actually want one in CSI but like that will happen...

Fav line: "...he wanted her in his arms again and those lips, those lips were calling to him."