kool keep

I was thinking 'shit shit shit!' when Bein had bite ben

Continue this, Now. xD

PS

It's HeatBlast ;)

holy crap

raven is a demon

awesome

dang

I'm loving this, but I have to say...I'm utterly confused.

Is Beast Boy the Vampire King guy? And is he Bein? And if so, how did all that happen? And is he married to Raven, or is she married to someone else? And Ben is Raven's and Beast Boy's child...right...?

Other than that, this is great. It's very well written, besides the miscommunications. And it's quite engaging as well.

PLease update. I love this story. It's so Cool.

O.O

O.O

I am SO confused!

HOW DID BEAST BOY GO VAMPY ON US?

GAH!

Brain MALFUNCTION!

...

And it's HeatBlast, not 'HotSpot'.

*shiver/twitch*

Urge to smack. RISING.

i like it its relly cool

O_O;

I'd just like to say a few things:

1. Immortal I can accept. Immortal and never aging beyond puberty between the Korean War and now? That's stretching it.

2. Hotspot is part of a race native to a star. The odds of any carbon-based lifeform being able to make physical contact with him, much less drain whatever superheated fluids that course through him, and live are astronomical (No pun intended.) Besides, fire is one of a vampire's great weaknesses.

3. You have gutted continuity and roasted it on a spit. Just wanted to get that last one off my chest.

Other than this, it's a pretty good story. Just wanted to mention the points that were aggravating my suspension of disbelief.

this is so confusing... so bein is beastboy, raven is beastboy's wife, their son is ben, something about vampires being imortal. okkay... yeah. please continue!

This story seems to have a pretty good start, and I'm excited to know what's gona happen. Keep up the good work. Also, I think you meant Heatblast, not HotSpot.