great story. i think the subtle hints of Seishiro's true nature are done perfectly.

I don't know why this story has so few reviews, maybe it's because TB's been a long old fandom. But I loved this story - the characterization was brilliant, the 'mystery' did hold me in quite a bit of a suspense, and the ending was extremely satisfying.

M i loved it i love the tragic love ending it was brillent and defently left a hint of what to come later on in the manga . I give you kudos. I wish for my more siesub but this works and defently went along with the manga good! loved it!

I really enjoyed reading this. You've captured the atmosphere of Tokyo Babylon so well that it almost feels like I'm reading the manga. I especially liked your dialogue. It reflected the character's personalities beautifully. Even the OCs reminded me of several of the

victims in Tokyo Babylon.

Why hasn't anyone reviewed this yet? This was a great story...especially the last line "all great love stories are tragedies"...so true. Especially in Tokyo Bablon and X/19's case... Great job! _ Keep writing!