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| AddictionToFiction 2006-08-27 ch 8,  | abuseOH MY GOSH, THAT WAS AMAZING. I was not expecting anything like that when I clicked on this story. WOW. WOW. That was GREAT. Very well-written, well thought-out, well paced, well everything. That last line was awesome. GOOD JOB! I seriously loved it! Ignoring the fact that Dallas is a fictious character, I hope this really happen to him before he died. Wow. I hope you write another fic soon!! |
| JoHnNy CaStLe 2006-08-27 ch 8, | abuseThat was by far the best fanfiction I have ever read... xoAllieox |
| Samurai101 2006-08-27 ch 8, anon. | abuseOh, wow. this story is absolutely amazing!The whole thing is breathtaking, and delightfully depressing. All through this chapter I was wondering if you would or wouldn't kill Dally, but you did, and somehow that made a supurb ending. ^^ Thanks for the great fic.^^ |
| Lintucuiel 2006-08-27 ch 8, | abuseGreat chapter! I love the way it ended :) |
| soda'slover 2006-08-27 ch 8, | abuseThat was so sad!Poor Dally, to bad he still ended up dying.Great story! |
| soda'slover 2006-08-27 ch 7, | abuseIm so glad Soda didnt die!But Johnny, poor little sweet Johnny?Was that really him(Of coase I know it was)?Wow, he's the now Dallas of Tulsa.I bet his parents dont beat him no more!Great chapter, update soon please! |
| soda'slover 2006-08-27 ch 6, | abusePoor Soda! Did he live, Pony's going to die without him!Great chapter, update soon please! |
| imgonnaliveforever 2006-08-27 ch 8, | abusewere 2 people by the way.im reckless dreamer ant on right now.I just wont to say i love this story you wrote dallas so good.i can really see him smarting off to even a voice i hate what happen to Soda and Pony.It makes me think of the song Stay Gold stevie wonder sings at the beginning of The Outsiders for some reason it just makes you stop and think about life.But you are a great writer and write in character so well.keep going. |
| printandpolish 2006-08-27 ch 8, | abuseOh! Amazing. Just amazing. Thank you so much for sharing this. |
| TheMaskedArtist 2006-08-27 ch 8, | abuseGeez. That was friggin awesome. Good work! ^_^ |
| IAmOnlyMe 2006-08-27 ch 8, | abuseAww, I'm guessing that was the end. Great story though. I'm glad that you still had Dallas die in the end, strangely enough. I've always loved him the most, but his death was just so perfectly in-character that I think it's better that you had him still want to die, even after he knew that he had made a difference. Really, really amazing story. I hope to see more writing from you soon! : ) |
| Maddiecake 2006-08-27 ch 8, | abuseIt's over? Well... at least he kind of understood that he brought some good to the world... darn, I wish he hadn't died though. D: |
| TheMaskedArtist 2006-08-20 ch 7, | abuseHoly hell... This is really good. |
| Scarlett7 2006-07-08 ch 7, | abuseCan I just tell you- I LOVE this story!! So creative! Very nicely written. THANK YOU for continuing! Scarlett |
| Tensleep 2006-07-08 ch 7, | abuseOh wow. I never saw that one coming. It really is the one through all of this that hits home the most. I'm glad you saved it up for so long. I loved the emotions going on in there and the way Dallas got tricked was pretty clever. It fit, too. Great job. Keep up with the excellent work! See ya in the funny papers! Tens |