awsome story you got there! i rally liked the end, quite funny at times ;)

i really like that you write that carson is tougher then he looks, because if you ask me... i think that it is correct.

so keep on it, i really like it ;D

This was a terrific story if ever there was one! And the finish to it was plainly great. I love your writing style and storytelling. You definitely have a keen hand on the characterizations of the team and a gorgeous sense of tension and drama.

Thank you so much for writing this!
I hope to read more (Carson-centric) stories from you.

Loopy Beckett was nothing short of hilarious! And still the sense of danger lingered on. Very well done.

Your sense of suspense and drama is brilliant. I literally sat on the edge of my seat, and I so suffered with the bunch in this chapter. Poor Carson and team!

This was one hell of an introductory chapter, flah7! I'm really impressed with your writing skill and your gorgeous descriptions. Your characterizations are spot-on, and the only thing I regret is the fact that I didn't read any of your works before!

Very good!

Love love love how you write Carson! He's incredible! He doesn't get enough attention in stories, so you're fabulous. You write a story that could be so soppy and goey, but instead it is funny and exciting. Wonderful.

Hey there! Finally catching up on my fic reading and I love this story! Another great dose of whumping and humour and bonding and all the stuff I love. Poor old Carson though. How indeed will they get him through the gate ever again? ;-)

Ya know, I forgot to drop off a review after reading all of this the first time. Lovely! As always, your creative mind did it again and kept me wrapped up in yet another adventure. Poor Carson just doesn't stand a chance with you around and by no means am I complaining! You have a great way of carrying the excitement through your stories, leaving your reader satisfied at the end instead of begging for more. Well done.

Aw, fab. Those last few lines were wonderful, no, don't hold their breath! Lovely remark about Zelenka's stomach flu. Poor Carson, dead people and ants, quite awful. Rodney was pure magic all the way through. I loved this!

Oh, brilliant chapter! Really great. Utterly ewsome description of vomiting. And then... Peter, Oh Lord, stick the knife in why not? Rodney was totally excellent, he's freaked, isn't he? Great stuff.

Sorry I'm late. Aw man, this is just amazing. Poor, poor Carson, and what are they going to do!

You have such great characterizations! I just love how you write Beckett and McKay together. They really are like children, aren't they? Delightful!

I can definitely see where Rodney wouldn't like restraints. In addition to the Genii, he practically had to be shackled to the bed when under the influence of the enzyme. That's got to cause PTSD.

Still, Rodney is rather rude to make fun of poor Carson's weight. :-)

Boy, you sure do like whumping poor Carson, don't you? :-) Very interesting start to this story!