Pretty good. You never really got a sense of Sandor's true emotions in the series, so it was nice to get inside the guy's head and see what makes him tick and what his thoughts are regarding this mission and the respect he has for Captain Avatar.

One typo I caught: "empty boddles strew" should be "empty bottles strewn."

Keep on writing!

This was my first "Starblazers" read. A very good introspective from Sandor's POV. Though I never saw the show, I can imagine the setting based on the descriptives through Sandor's eyes. Even a cyborg has an opinion. This was well written. Look forward to reading more of your work!