WOW! They took a bath together! *squirm* ek! hOW CUTE!. short yet enjoyable! :D

So very cute and so very well written.

This is beautiful! Despite the small bit of awkwardness, since English is your second language, the heart of this fic (and the heart of Roy and Riza's relationship) really came through with every sentence. Very well done, and gorgeous analogies with the heaviness.

Aww! I just love the sort of tired and peaceful feeling this fic generates. It's like, Roy and Riza are so comfortable with each other. They sort of need this time alone- ridding each other of their sins and grievances. I really loved it. Great job! =P

Xx-Rekka-xX

I love the quality of your writing. All of your Royai fics are exceptionally good!

"His fingers are tangled in her hair, and he feels how the weight is finally lifting off his shoulders, how it’s becoming easier to breathe as the burden leaves his chest."

Very nice. I love the subtlety you achieved with this fic. ^^ Keep it up! I would love to see more RoyAi fics from you.

Aw
So sweet! ^^

I loved it.

Nice

Ah, this is really beautiful. Subtle and kinda sexy, but not tasteless, and it seems to be pretty in-character. These two are hard to characterize, so I think you did pretty well. And as for grammar and spelling mistakes, I didn't see any, but then I'm quite taken by the little story. Thank you for doing this couple justice.

Lovely

WOW...I loved this fic
How amzing you could to make a fic, talking about they together, in a shower, and not being vulgar, not having sexual insunuations. This is very rare.
I loved, because it been so bittersweet, so kind, with a lot a afection, how I think they are with each other.
Realy amazing.
And, you write very well in English, I don't have this courage to try. I undestand very well read, but to write...better not yet.
Congratulations!!

Aw! That was so good! Just a little bit of awkward grammar/sentence structure, MAYBE. Wow, that was really very sweet. I'm pretty sure this is the first Roy/Riza shower scene I've ever read without anything uhm sexual XD. But yeah, a really nice one shot ^_^

That was good. You should continue it.

This was excellent! I must say I'm impressed. You were able to convey so much emotion and meaning with this. Great job! I also like the subtle Royai-ness. I hope you write more fics with this pairing in the future. I also thought the ending was excellent. Great job!

By the way, what's your first language? I'm asking because English isn't my first language either. I guess I'm just curious...

OH, how beautiful! If you hadn't said that English was not your first language, I never would've guessed. Your wording was wonderful and the words just flowed naturally and gracefully. Really simple, but it's got great meaning and emotion in it. The last line stole my heart.

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