I love Zack. I really do. He's just so... Zack-y.

Looking forward to more chapters!

i still can not belive how much i love this story. and i am just so frustrated that this story is overlooked. i would love to read other stories from you(even if i dont like the thing your writing for.) btw, i have an idea for an original story as well. actually ive had that idea since i was 7. i know, creepy. you can create original stories on a place called it's mainly quizes but you can write original stories. heh, keep it up nya!
~Loyal Follower Lonely Kitty~
(congrats! you are #1 on my loyal followers list~)

By far this is my favorite fic EVER. really.originality is hard to come by these days and this story is nothing but. i love that you used angel names and truths. i really hope that you make more fics and continue this one as well. keep it up nya!
~loyal reader Lonely Kitty

Awesome work, Flamestar(author). I really like how this story is going to sound. Keep it up!

Can you please read and review my story Operation:YukiKaze.

Absolutely incredible. You have lots of very distinct characters with very good interactions. I love Jehiel! He reminds me of one of my friends ^-^;

As you mentioned earlier, I do notice quite a bit of grammar and spelling issues. Have you ever thought about getting a beta reader? In case you don't know- a beta is someone who looks over your work to read through it and give suggestions about plot, plot holes, grammar, spelling, character development, etc.

I look forward to seeing this story continue on!

8/10

Let's face it. This story is awesome! Your plot is great, the scenes and characters all mesh together to create one great story! Though, the title and description are all to cliche to be noticed. Personally, I'd recommend something with the word Angel in it or some variation of The _ Sunrise... Maybe The Flamestar's Sunrise? Also, due to the fact that most stories are about trainers careers' being kick-started suddenly, it doesn't look original. Add the part about mad scientists and evil organization, and you have the basis for the basic cliche story: possible the worst thing for a story like this. Do change it!

Otherwise, yeah, I do want to meet chaos. And who's the new guy you've introduced who seems to know everything and reveal little? I smell a plot twist with this new pokemon, Azrael, as well.

Otherwise, keep up the great work!

Very good at the moment. I will be watching this one.

Great story! Have you abandoned this? If you're not sure, please don't, becuase it really is great. If you're taking a break from writing, that's very understandable, but can you PLEASE let us know either way? Please?

Chapter 16 was phenominal. I tried to understand what Zethro was saying, and I only understood the first sentence. I gave up after that. ^_^;

Please update soon, and show more of Zigzagoon and Electrike! *Doesn't remember names well at the moment*

Hm.. this chapter was interesting. And suspenseful. Glad to see that some of my questions have been answered about Crimson Dawn.

Arcana Energy, well that's interesting. I like that idea a lot. Wonder what will happen to Shrike. And how Aira and Rayne will get out of their little perdicament. Though I'm still extremely curious as to why there was an explosion in the sea that caused them to end up in this island in the first place. XD

There was one thing about this chapter, though... Rayth doesn't know what electricity is? XD That's kind of hard to believe, but ehh... it gives a good idea of the 'world' and living style the Crimson Dawn are living in.

Anyways, this was a good chapter. Can't wait for the next. Sorry this review is like majorly late... o_o

See ya!
Katie

I really like your story. You put in characters that don't seem boring, and they aren't cliche. You have some ncie character development, and I love the Action/Gore scenes. Put more Action/gore scenes in please! ^_^

I believe you wondered a few chapters back on why you weren't getting too many reviews. If I may comment why, it's because this story is rather cliche. People look at a story's title and summary, and if they decide it's too cliche for them they're not going to read it -- there's alot of crap here on fanfiction and most people try to avoid reading it.

I've seen your story before and passed it up several times, but a few days ago I decided to give it a chance. And damn it, it's good -- addicting too for that matter. You've basically taken the cliche and reminded me WHY it's cliche. You are wonderfully brilliant at writing something that hooks a reader in, and that turns the normal interesting again. Keep up the good writing.

By the way, your grammer still does need work in a few places. You've gotten better as you've gone on, but there are two places I've found recently that don't quite make sense. Might I suggest a beta reader just to check for grammer mistakes? By the way, if that analogy of Shrike looking back on stories he's written and decided that he's improved is to be compared to you, I find that highly amusing and original. Him writing fanfiction, in fact, is probably one of the most original things in this story.

Keep up the good work, though don't expect too many reviews from me. I only review when I feel something needs to be said; afterall, wouldn't you get tired of hearing 'good job' over and over again for each chapter? It gets rather meaningless after a while... Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter. Can't wait to see if Chaos shows up in this too. I half wonder if he's that Ash enthusiast... Naw, couldn't be.

Yay, update! ^_^

I loved your description in this chapter, especially of the High Chancellor's room. Yummy. XD

That chapter seemed kinda short but hey who am I to complain? ;) It was great nontheless.

I liked reading Aira's POV, and I wonder what Aira's 'experiences' were... can't wait to learn more about her past. And especially RAYNE'S! She's so confusing... she must be some sort of psychic or something from what I'm picking up.

Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter. Boo at short review D:

See ya!
Katie

You probably know me better as Shiny Umbreon, but I just had to drop a review here. Anyways, Arrowclaw's still destroying my house, and it's good as usual, Shrike. When will you reveal Chaos? Or at least put in some more conversations? Please?

youve got a pretty wicked crossover going on hear Id like to have a charter of mine put in it if thats not to much ask
Awsome fic