The beginning of this story has left me rolling on the floor, unable to breathe I am laughing so hard! I am not a ZaDr fan, but I still loved it! XD

This is awesome! Please continue!

hehe i hvae no idea whats going on but i i think it's still cute

Continue! Please!

god damn will it kill you to update this? its really good and u havent updated it in like what 5 years? thats just not right...did u like die or some thing?

holy crap! my two favorite pairings from IZ in one!

Omg!That's sad.Please UP-DATE!REAL!SOON!

HOLY CRAP! I LUV THE BEgining! Hehehe... *Thinks perverted thoughts* *Starts to hallucinate* AWWWW CUTE HOMO LOVE! Anyway write more magical person. And remember always FTW

(Fuck the walrus) HAHAHAHA LOL Here's http:/www.youtube.com/watch?vo06lSusvQDI link u might like

aww poor gir.X(

this is really good, please keep writing. X)

Aw, poor GIR... Lot's of OOCness, but, oh, well. It's good anyhow. NOW, UPDATE, YOU... you... uh... person you!

'sniff' please, please write more 'sniff' i loves this story, i loves it good.

On another note, Takker is kinda right. This may be better if it involved Gir trying to win Gaz over. But that'd be harder to write. And GirxGaz is my 2nd favorite pairing, so I still love this story.

GirxGaz is one of my favorite pairings, so I love it! Keep up the good work. _

This is awesome! A little out of character for Gaz... but awesome nonetheless!

Hey... this might be a stupid question but... how do you add stories? this website is really confusing. O_o

Very cute! Odd pairing but I love it.

hmm, okay. this story definitely has potential, and you seem to have a good concept of grammar from what I've seen. unfortunately, I could only get through maybe half of the first chapter. you have Gir down pat, but Gaz is very out of character in this, which made it kind of hard to stomach. actually, I think you would have been able to get a lot more out of the story by making Gaz gloomy and angry all the time. it would have provided more of a struggle with Gir trying to win Gaz over, because she doesn't care about gir, ya know? this isn't a bad story, it just needs a little fine tuning. maybe you could write a different version of this where Gaz is more in character, and continue this story too. that way, everyone who likes this story can keep it that way, and everyone who wants a little more 'in character' gaz can have their story to review. anyway, I'm not trying to flame you, but rather I'm trying to offer constructive critisism. I hope this helps! -Takker