 Latnixa Tisballex 2008-03-13 . chapter 1 If it wasn't for the suicide thing at the beginning, this would be a great fic! It's good anyway, and I know that's how it happens in the manga/anime, but still...Maybe she could just fall in or something? I'm not asking you to change it, I'm just saying it'd be better without the attempted suicide thing. Since, y'know, suicide isn't funny and all...
Other than that, great fic! Thanks for writing(except for the suicide part)
~Latni-chan |