Very well written, It was also realistic, without making it seen to LoVely. I really liked it. Bravo! Encore!

Wow great story, would it be ok with you if I added it to my C2.

Oh, totally twisted ending, but I really love it. Not to mention, good voice on both Veronica and Logan (and I have to say, some of the lines: hee!). Nice job!

interesting. i like it! its gonna go into my faves