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| gen x 2008-10-01 ch 40, anon. | abuseNot bad |
| Redzorin 2008-09-06 ch 40,  | abuseNice freakin fanfic. |
| Radio Driver 2008-08-30 ch 40, | abuseGood work, Ash. Keep on keepin on. I've changed my name to Radio Driver from Kool Moe D. |
| luger 7 2008-08-28 ch 40, | abuseYou rock. Party on dude. |
| Sir Thames 2008-08-27 ch 40, | abuseGood show, mate. Spot on. |
| Thomas Drovin 2008-08-22 ch 40, | abuseWelcome back! Not a bad chapter, however WHERE were Darkmann and Koquillion being sent? We know where the other bad guys were going just not them. What IS the Dark Blue Alliance plan? Will it WORK? Update again soon so I can find out! |
| Emma Iveli 2008-08-22 ch 40, | abuseOkay... that was funny... I liked how boths Ranmas ran away... |
| gen x 2008-08-19 ch 39, anon. | abuseNot bad |
| Screaming Dean 2008-08-02 ch 39, | abuseI'm happy to see you're doing so well. Keep up the good work. |
| Redzorin 2008-08-02 ch 39, | abusenice freakin fanfic |
| Radio Driver 2008-08-02 ch 39, | abuseGood goin, Ash. Keep on keepin on. |
| Emma Iveli 2008-08-01 ch 39, | abuseAwesome chapter! I like you added Tokyo Mew Mew to it... and I love fact that Ichigo is calling herslef a mouse. |
| PEJP Bengtzone 2008-08-01 ch 39, | abuseI guess I wasn't awake, at the time you said you haven't seen the whole anime of Tokyo Mew Mew; since in the end, Kisshu made sure that Ichigo could defeat that alien demigod Deep Blue, who was the only main character in the whole anime to die, while the three aliens; Kisshu, Pai, and Taruto, were using their spacecraft to return to their people, or to help them find a planet to colonize. Anyway, good luck, and keep going on! |
| Thomas Drovin 2008-08-01 ch 39, | abuseWelcome back! So I see the Mews have joined the Guardians and Deep Blue joined the Dark Alliance causing it to change it's name. What next? Update soon so I can find out! PS: I have an idea have Koquillion suggest that if they want to get their energy WITHOUT being found by their enimes, they should SABOTAGE the Guardians instrments that detect where they are. |
| Sir Thames 2008-07-28 ch 38, | abuseNice work here, mate. Spot on. |