This story is very sad, quite of remind me of myself. I thank you for publishing this poem.

This is another of ur poem? sigh... it's good! I wonder where you get all those I deas oh well i guess your a really good writer.

aswome poem ur good keep it up could u tell me what u think of my story though it is only me second fanfic so go easy on me its called Hald Demon! thanks i would really aprricate it.

Very nicely done :-)